c_ky_6
11-28-2007, 09:49 AM
when the sun starts to go down
everything around him makes no sound
only the waves that slowly flow
with the sun giving the water that nice, summer glow
as the man casts out his pole he wishes to catch
but everyone knows that against the fish, he is no match
he slowly pulls in another empty hook
but he keeps casting and casting in hope to catch something to cook
soon the man becomes impatient with the fish
and thats when, of course, he caught his wanted dish
plz need feed back
everything around him makes no sound
only the waves that slowly flow
with the sun giving the water that nice, summer glow
as the man casts out his pole he wishes to catch
but everyone knows that against the fish, he is no match
he slowly pulls in another empty hook
but he keeps casting and casting in hope to catch something to cook
soon the man becomes impatient with the fish
and thats when, of course, he caught his wanted dish
plz need feed back