Love me not

[blazeofglory]

A thing of beauty is a thing that passes away
Eye a rose in the morning it cannot see a day
Spring is a season of joys
But it fades before we could really enjoy

It is the body you like to kiss
What you call love is a thing amiss
For when the lover parts, love ends
A thing that is so fragile can always bend

Love is nothing but an illusion of the mind
We seek for real love but we cannot find
All we see is a fairy tale
your love story gets swept away by a small gale

As love is false, do not pretend to love one
You will get nothing and find real no one
For there is no sacrifice except in fables
All love stories are weaven but in hyperboles

[Caravaggio]

I really like the first two lines.

A thing of beauty is a thing that passes away
Eye a rose in the morning it cannot see a day

There is a lot of truth to those lines. It needs some work in a few places, but altogethor a fun bit of fancy.

[dibyendra]

A thing of beauty is a thing that passes away
Eye a rose in the morning it cannot see a day
Spring is a season of joys
But it fades before we could really enjoy

It is the body you like to kiss
What you call love is a thing amiss
For when the lover parts, love ends
A thing that is so fragile can always bend

Love is nothing but an illusion of the mind
We seek for real love but we cannot find
All we see is a fairy tale
your love story gets swept away by a small gale

As love is false, do not pretend to love one
You will get nothing and find real no one
For there is no sacrifice except in fables
All love stories are weaven but in hyperboles

Dear Blaze, now I can assume how much you are heartbroken right now from falling in love. Love, it's such a complex one, and relationship is even more complex where mutual understanding should be there if it has to go a log way. Conflict arises when ego clashes, trust fades away, anger rises....
So, this poem is what I find really heartbreaking Blaze an I'm sorry to hear if my assumption is right....There's always next and hopes we shouldn't lose....

And yes, this is really a fine poem of yours Blaze :thumbs_up !

Love,
Dibyendra

[blazeofglory]

Dib, you are really kind and of course come ahead of everything to offer something inspirational.