(cant think of title...?? suggestions?)

[manny2]

The little girl,
she finally stands.
With tears in her eyes;
Looking away from the ground.

Life as it stands,
meaningless and pointless,
no goal worth going for.

Tired of all,
uncaring with no feelings.
Enough is enough.

time to walk away,
get beyond this all.
with a hole in her heart,
she stood up tall and strong.

taking a deep breath,
walking away from the grave,
where she buried all left of her love.
Finally time to let go.
Something better is to come.

[ampoule]

Letting Go?
I am glad this poem ends with hope.

And I believe it should be 'taking a deep breath', not breathe.

[manny2]

thats what i was going to title, it but i already have one called letting go, hmm.

thanks for the correction!

[Pendragon]

If you were going to call it "Letting Go" which would have been my suggestion as well, but already have a poem with that title, may I suggest "Closure". instead? Same theme, different word.

[manny2]

hmmm but its not really closure because of the line that says

with a hole in her heart
she stood up tall and strong

[jon1jt]

A-Mending

[cracking muse]

How about a simple 'little girl' as the title?

[manny2]

thank you i think i will actually just call it that :)

[thechampion]

how about this one: the blood of the lambs boils in hell forever. i think it fits