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blazeofglory
11-21-2007, 08:59 PM
You exist but mirroring my own reflection
This will indeed enrage you
In nature we can not without using up the other

Everything was here in wait for my birth
The sun was there shining brightly, lest I would shiver with cold
The seasons were there for me mellowing with fruits and foods
For the earth has cooled it self to sooth me in its lap.

Rivers were there to quench my thirst
Flowere bllomed to delight my senses

The Buddha and Christ precded my arrival to make my coming magniloquently
Songs were composed to set me in a state of rapture

For I am the center of the universe
The refinement of every virtue

Does anything exist wihout me?
The wind comes to a stand still
Rivers stop flowing

For my existence pfrecedes all
Nothing lives on once I part

For once I die, all they will die with me
For me, indeed for me only

dibyendra
11-22-2007, 06:18 AM
You exist but mirroring my own reflection
This will indeed enrage you
In nature we can not without using up the other

Everything was here in wait for my birth
The sun was there shining brightly, lest I would shiver with cold
The seasons were there for me mellowing with fruits and foods
For the earth has cooled it self to sooth me in its lap.

Rivers were there to quench my thirst
Flowere bllomed to delight my senses

The Buddha and Christ precded my arrival to make my coming magniloquently
Songs were composed to set me in a state of rapture

For I am the center of the universe
The refinement of every virtue

Does anything exist wihout me?
The wind comes to a stand still
Rivers stop flowing

For my existence pfrecedes all
Nothing lives on once I part

For once I die, all they will die with me
For me, indeed for me only

Wow! this one is really different having vivid imagination Blaze! The ending of this poem is quite nice although there is a sad tone attached with it. I liked most portions of this poem and only thing you should consider is spelling errors.
This is really a good piece Blaze.... Keep up your good work ! :thumbs_up

With Love,
Dibyendra

blazeofglory
12-01-2007, 11:39 AM
You are really a reservoir of compassion. I indeed feel moved by every word of you, that indeed irrigates the thirsty soul