here

[cogs]

i was in love with you
i remember walking in the woods
i remember along the bank of the lake
i remember at the park on the rocks
i remember watching tv
eating pizza
making you laugh
chatting online
planning our future
getting drunk at your wake
getting angry at your carelessness
speaking love to the air
planning eternity where i might see you
knowing your value inside my heart
obscure things triggering your memory
you were here
you were
i remember

[ampoule]

I like this very much cogs. Of course, I wonder if it is about an actual death or the death of a love affair.

[Xcape]

Great poem. :)

[Caravaggio]

A nice personal poem of love that was written honestly.

[blp]

The end is very beautiful.

[blazeofglory]

i was in love with you
i remember walking in the woods
i remember along the bank of the lake
i remember at the park on the rocks
i remember watching tv
eating pizza
making you laugh
chatting online
planning our future
getting drunk at your wake
getting angry at your carelessness
speaking love to the air
planning eternity where i might see you
knowing your value inside my heart
obscure things triggering your memory
you were here
you were
i remember


Is this the sheer memory and nothin else. Is this the continuity of amorous relatioship or a parted one. Shows a shade of sadness!

[cogs]

yes, the memory of a departed girlfriend, who was 25. she had a heart defect. at times i miss her.

[blazeofglory]

yes, the memory of a departed girlfriend, who was 25. she had a heart defect. at times i miss her.

Yes Cogs, UI am sad to hear that. But this is life, and things happen here not always in our favor, and we need to season all of them no matter how hard they are.