Wishbone

[ampoule]

Wishbone

He stood there
holding the wishbone,
dangling it in front of her,
a sly smile on his face,
but this competition
would not worry her,
no matter who loses,
they both win.


amp, Thanksgiving Eve, November TwentyFirst, TwoThousandSeven

[mazHur]

Wishbone

He stood there
holding the wishbone,
dangling it in front of her,
a sly smile on his face,
but this competition
would not worry her,
no matter who loses,
they both win.


amp, Thanksgiving Eve, November TwentyFirst, TwoThousandSeven

Hmmm,,,,,,lovely sexy ending . Good.

[PrinceMyshkin]

Hmm, I love the enigmatic, the elliptical, but...

But I wish I could make a more confident guess at what the ending means.

[ampoule]

Hmmm...thank you maz.
Prince, a TOP SECRET message is on its way and I have decided not to kill you. :D

[Scube]

Nice! Fun!

[jon1jt]

cute. the ending is incomplete. Wishbone II, please. :)

[TheFifthElement]

Oh this is lovely ampoule - and the ending is perfect (ignore those men!). Some defeats are well worth it ;)

[dibyendra]

Oh this is lovely ampoule - and the ending is perfect (ignore those men!). Some defeats are well worth it ;)

"(ignore those men!)" :) haha this statement made me laugh...thanks Fifth !

I loved this Amp as this is quite different from your past poems in my view. It's so sweeeeet...... :thumbs_up

[PrinceMyshkin]

Hmm, I love the enigmatic, the elliptical, but...

But I wish I could make a more confident guess at what the ending means.

Yes, I see now that I ought to have given more weight to his "sly" smile.

[Xillus_Xavier]

Hey I really liked this!
What a short but clever poem.
I think this is now one of my favorites.