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mazHur
11-13-2007, 08:13 PM
Beggars!
by mazHur

Moment by moment,
day turns into night,
night into day.
Life goes on and on
like a lame beggar,
like a doomed wretch,
carrying .a bowl in his hand
waiting for someone
-someone generous,
to toss a dime into it;
Or some kindhearted lady
to roll some food into it.
Life goes on and on
and spares no mortal;
the bowl is always there
looking with wide open mouth
toward the sky,
in someone's hands;
the limp is replaced by blindness,
deafness or nothing debilitating;
yet the king and the beggar
come to the same junction,
live by the same method:
Begging!

Pretty^Athens
11-14-2007, 07:37 AM
Hey love it! it's well written and and ideas' expressed!
write on,
Janan.

AuntShecky
11-14-2007, 03:20 PM
I told you before, I shall tell you again --
your writing keeps improving with each new posting.

symphony
11-14-2007, 05:53 PM
I loved this. I think this is my favourite from what i've seen of ur poems so far. :thumbs_up

The last "begging" line seemed unnecessary to me though.