The arrival of you

[blazeofglory]

Now with the end of autumn,
and the shiver of winter beckoning
I am thinking about you

I think more about you when I am in winteries
You may, on the contray in abundance
That is the gap that needs evening up

I am here shivering and shivering
The chill is too piercing
Yet the thought of not meeting you
Is benumbing me

You need comforts out of me
You need me when I am in fun and jolly
But I do not need you in that state
For a friend in need is a freind indeed
could be what love is

The way the thirsty tree wants dewdeops to sip
A hot forest a rainy season

Your arrival will really be a moment of joy
If you really meet me in my days of woes.

Let the arrival of you be a day of sunshine
To awaken a sleeping bud into a blooming flower

And you will shine in my life

[Gadget Girl]

So meaningful, blaze. I can feel what you feel in this poem. It's very heartfelt. A very good poem.

[dibyendra]

I found this one really touching Blaze. I'll tag this as one of my personal favorite of your poems so far Blaze. This poem pours a true feeling of a lover. And you have brilliantly expressed comparing with the winter and your poem speaks the intense desire to be with her. This is my personal interpretation Blaze. Nice work blaze. :thumbs_up

[andrew23]

There's honesty. But I can't feel you. You must pour out all of your emotions in it. Make it powerful and beautiful.

But then again, it's quite fine..

"The way the thirsty tree wants dewdeops to sip
A hot forest a rainy season"

I like that part. Good use of visual imagination..

I just didn't quite like the last two paragraphs, i felt it didn't connect..

But good job anyway..