Starting Over

[manny2]

So empty and cold,
Emotionless and confused.
Sitting and pondering,
What is true.

Afraid of being hurt
being torn apart all day
Used and thrown away
Nothing is left
But pieces.

Shreds of what once was
Painful truths pierce through
Facing reality
Seeing what is finally there

One thing left to do
Pick up the pieces
Put it back together
Fix what is going wrong
Completely start over.

[Sweets America]

Nice poem! I can relate to it, especially to the closing stanza! Fixing what is wrong and starting over, yep!
I like the references to the mind falling into pieces.
Oh, in the line:
being torn a part all day
I would have written
being torn apart all day
Tell me if I'm wrong.

[manny2]

haha oops!!thanks forthe correction : ) and for the comment