stormy sky
11-07-2007, 12:45 AM
This poem seems disjointed and follows no sense of rhytm at all,
it's a bad attempt at trying to get my poems to rhyme again,
i don't think i shall ever try to get my poems to rhyme after this one again.
I stole something last night,
crept into your room,like a moth drawn to fire and it's doom.
I know it was wrong,and I wouln't change it to right,
Yes I did,I stole some of you last night.
You lay dead to the world,
and I leaned closer to you;
breathed in your fallen breathe as you lay curled,
in a dream and I in it's residue.
How I wanted to step into the hidden oasis beneath your eyelids,
and deftly make my way to your heart,
so in the morning you wouldn't realise,
while stealing some of you,I'd left behind all of myself ,not just a part.
it's a bad attempt at trying to get my poems to rhyme again,
i don't think i shall ever try to get my poems to rhyme after this one again.
I stole something last night,
crept into your room,like a moth drawn to fire and it's doom.
I know it was wrong,and I wouln't change it to right,
Yes I did,I stole some of you last night.
You lay dead to the world,
and I leaned closer to you;
breathed in your fallen breathe as you lay curled,
in a dream and I in it's residue.
How I wanted to step into the hidden oasis beneath your eyelids,
and deftly make my way to your heart,
so in the morning you wouldn't realise,
while stealing some of you,I'd left behind all of myself ,not just a part.