Night

[Broken Wings]

As the raindrops fall and fall
Out the window midnight calls
All the stars the sky doth hold
Are covered now, both young and old
Beneath the sky so bleak and vast
I feel confined under clouds that last
I want to fly and stretch my wings
To open my lungs and release the screams
From those who died and those who live
From those with nothing left to give
I hunt in darkness, most divine
This is the Night, and the Night is mine.

[stormy sky]

it's nice,
though there seemed to be a sudden shift in the persona's position
ie from the captive to the hunter.
the last line is very strong and i really liked that.

[Broken Wings]

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