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kornxtech
11-04-2007, 09:02 PM
Moments of unbreakable insanity
Focusing and switching
eyes returned to suspect this
Grip returning to my fingertips.

Fear blending with my tears,
you come to sadden my ultimate fate.
My eyes flooded with glass
with nothing to shred the stings.
Through the walls of darkness.

Glance from side to side,
top bottom with no sign to climb.
Shutting my lids to relieve my sin...
Feelings broke all my dreams
lashing picks to terrible Schemes.

kornxtech
11-04-2007, 09:11 PM
Leaving Nothing but a trace of your
memory, Splitting every bone I gave you.
Every time shortened by every pain you've
buried, nothing seemed right till the time I faded.

I bled for you for so long.
Figured the truth by a walk,
fictioned out by every words you've
spoken. Not leaving me alone,
by the scent of your crypt.

quasimodo1
11-05-2007, 11:49 AM
To kornxtech: I like your poem; it is creative and subtle. I reference the first poem which is in my opinion much better than the second. quasimodo1