Week after

[stormy sky]

So have I washed down grief with a glass of whisky,
swalloed all of you ,me and all the insignificant rest in gulps.

Taken a train in the middle of the night to the outskirts,
and made lve a phone call away,
finished all of you ,me and all the insignificant rest in one moment broken free from the rest.

Scribbled on yellowed paper,broken and ill conjured love poems,
penned down you,me and all the insinificant rest on lifeless loose papers.

Called up someone,I'm not sure who and spewed venom for about an hour,
set free the trapped you ,me and all the insinificant rest in the frost bitten after dinner breeze.

And after it has all been laid to rest,
you me and all the insinificant rest,
we wake up in jolts amid passing nightmares.

[motherhubbard]

I loved the beginning and the ending. A lot. I liked the picture you made in the middle, but it was kind of rough on me. It didn’t flow in there for me and I had a hard time keeping up, but I’m a little slow-

[stormy sky]

Thank u,
Ive posted after a really long time on lit net and i'm so glad you're the first one to comment on it.