Scars of the battle

[dibyendra]

Squeeze the bloody history.
Every drops of blood reveals the different stories.
Stories about battles in the past,
battle for love, battle of hatred,
battle to overcome evil, battle for regaining power,
battle for rights and revolution,
and battles for human welfare and evolution.

Many harsh stories,
some filled with glooms and looms of fears,
some webbed with conspiracies,
some shadowed by wars, and
some tarnished by egos and vanities,
disclosing how this world has been fragmented into the pieces,
why the human turned enemy from their own species,
how blue skies were obscured by clouds of terrors,
how silent nights were filled with horror stories,
how they clashed with each other,
how the hatred later turned into evil,
how was the scene of aftermath of the battles,
how they stained battlefield with vale of blood, and
how they scarred mother nature with their artilleries.

The signs of wailing of the mother nature can be seen clearly
and the questions she aroused can be deeply felt,
how many more scars of the battle
I need to tolerate
before this world get devastated of colliding
to declare the war is over eternally ?

How many more false religious leaders,
before the settlement of the ongoing disputes and war,
still have to born to spread misbelieves and
divide this world into fragments ?
How many times each fragments need to divide
before they get reunited ?
How many family sacrifices are still needed
before peace prevails ?

The future is really dubious
by observing the progression of catastrophic weapons…
Are they being made to terminate our own species ?
When everything in this world tumbles down chaotically,
and there's nothing more left to lose,
it would be too late to tame the inferno,
and there would require no judgment at all,
for who has vanquished and who has fallen behind.

But the scars of the battle
on the face of the mother nature will remain forever…

[blazeofglory]

Squeeze the bloody history.
Every drops of blood reveals the different stories.
Stories about battles in the past,
battle for love, battle of hatred,
battle to demolish evil, battle for regaining power,
battle for rights, battle for revolution,
battles for human welfare, battle for evolution.

Many harsh stories are filled with glooms and looms of fears.
Each page of story reveals
how this whole world has been fragmented into the pieces,
why the human turned enemy from their own species,
how blue skies were obscured by clouds of terrors,
how silent nights were filled with horror stories,
how they clashed with each other,
how the hatred later turned into evil,
how was the scene of aftermath of the battles,
how they stained green lands with vale of blood, and
how they scarred mother nature with their artilleries.

The signs of wailing of the mother nature can be seen clearly
and the questions she aroused can be deeply felt,
how many more scars of the battle
I need to tolerate
before this world get devastated of colliding
to declare the war is over eternally ?

How many more false religious leaders,
before the settlement of the ongoing disputes and war,
still have to born to spread misbelieves and
divide this world into fragments ?
How many times each fragments need to divide
Before they get reunited ?
How many family sacrifices are still needed
before peace prevails ?


The future is really dubious
by observing the progression of catastrophic weapons…
Are they being made to terminate their own species ?

When everything in this world tumbles down chaotically,
and there's nothing more left to lose,
it would be too late to tame the inferno,
and there would require no judgment at all,
for who has vanquished and who has fallen behind.

- Dibyendra Hyoju
Novemeber 3, 2007

Please post your views regarding this poem when you finish reading.

Thank you !

Best,
Dibyendra


Dib, you are a real poet, and how deeply a poet feels for the pains of his people, sharing every bit of it is how appealingly presented herein your poem.

A poet is different from the rest in that a poet is a person of sensibility, and he or she can "feel" the pain. Here you are really sad at the fact of what our nation is going through.

Of course while the rest can live apathetically unconcerned about what goes with the agonized, but the poet can be at peace with anything at all.

He shares every feeling. I believe Dib, you must be a sentimental man. You can not be blind when you see a person suffering before your eyes.

Your poem really deeply touched me.

[dibyendra]

Dib, you are a real poet, and how deeply a poet feels for the pains of his people, sharing every bit of it is how appealingly presented herein your poem.

A poet is different from the rest in that a poet is a person of sensibility, and he or she can "feel" the pain. Here you are really sad at the fact of what our nation is going through.

Of course while the rest can live apathetically unconcerned about what goes with the agonized, but the poet can be at peace with anything at all.

He shares every feeling. I believe Dib, you must be a sentimental man. You can not be blind when you see a person suffering before your eyes.

Your poem really deeply touched me.

Oh Blaze, I'm overwhelmed by your compliments. Thank you so much that. Actually, I wrote considering the facts of the past and the chaotic situations around the world, and I'm not focusing ONLY on our nation. It's true that our nation has also faced decades of similar situations but here I'm trying to convey message looking at the scenario of this world.

I'm glad that this one deeply touched you and made emotional.

Let's see what other friends here in this forum think about this one.

Thank you !

Best,
Dibyendra

[dibyendra]

Any more views regarding this poem ? I need more views, critics, any harsh comment. So, it would be great if I get more critics about this poem before I move to write another one. I need feedbacks because the another piece is similar to this one and without more feedbacks about this one, I cannot assure myself if I have written really a goon one or not. Thanks blaze for your quick comment ! I'm glad that you loved this one.

[Pretty^Athens]

Dib, i was excited while reading your poem. love the way you express yuour feelings about that topic. it's obvious that you have a very unique talent. write on!

[dibyendra]

Dib, i was excited while reading your poem. love the way you express yuour feelings about that topic. it's obvious that you have a very unique talent. write on!

Thank you Pretty for your view regarding this poem. I'm glad that you liked the way I expressed in this poem.

But I noticed that this kind of poems gets really very few comments unlike other poems. If that is not so, that is what I wanted to know what's wrong with this kind of poem ?

[ampoule]

We need more poems like this, more poets to write them, more poets to shout them from the rooftops, but more places to print them, more places to read them, more places to discuss them...and that, to only stir the apathy.
Good job.

[dibyendra]

We need more poems like this, more poets to write them, more poets to shout them from the rooftops, but more places to print them, more places to read them, more places to discuss them...and that, to only stir the apathy.
Good job.

Thank you so much ampoule for your provocative view regarding this poem. I agree with your view Amp.Unless and until, poems of these kinds are being printed, discussed, poems written would be worthless. I'm glad to hear this kind of comment Amp. :thumbs_up