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aashishameya
11-03-2007, 02:52 AM
A nostalgic adieu to sky
A gentle kiss on earth
A memorable touch on leaves
A cosmic gift to rivulets
An everlasting relation with seeds
Rain drops
Awaken divine emotions inside lovers’ heart
And play their part truthfully.

blazeofglory
11-03-2007, 05:47 AM
A nostalgic adieu to sky
A gentle kiss on earth
A memorable touch on leaves
A cosmic gift to rivulets
An everlasting relation with seeds
Rain drops
Awaken divine emotions inside lovers’ heart
And play their part truthfully.

It indeed proves how much deeply a poet can penetrate deeper into the nature of the objective, and herein I feel the poet can go into raindrops immersing himself or herself in them.

That is why I reckon a poet as a mystic, and indeed until one has a great amount of sensibility this type of poetry can not be cascaded.

I enjoyed every line of the poem. I often liken the post to God, for both are creators from one perspective.

aashishameya
11-03-2007, 09:00 AM
thank u very much dear for ur words...though i am still trying to find out how to write poetry?