One Call

[manny2]

Sitting in your hole
3A.M. passes by
Finally the morning arrives
your awareness comes to state of mind
Sober you are
Without a drink left in you
Awaiting a guard to pass by
To ask for your one call

The turn arrives for your phone call
carefully picking that one person in mind
The phone repetitively rings
Finally it comes to no answer.
you're stuck for another 24 hours

[GoofyFlamingo]

i like how you capture the moment, and describe how the person is feeling without saying how they feel. even for someone who hasn't been in that situation, i feel as though i am there when i read it.

one small grammar error: in the last line your should be you're

[blazeofglory]

Some experiences all of us funnily undergo in day today affairs.

You have a vivid and vibrant picture to present.

[amanda_isabel]

amazingly real; i can almost see it. :D

[manny2]

thanks : ), one of my friends was in a jail cell.. and i thought id write about how i would feel if i was in one haha

[goldenrod]

Don't like the thought of imprisonment. Hope your way is the only way I shall experience it!:(

goldenrod.