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aashishameya
11-01-2007, 01:09 AM
Hungry were the people
They ate like a pig
Till the end of last grain
They were licking the pot
One can eat it, enjoy it
As much he wants
She is a source of eternal pleasure
Whose soul is wounded.

Virgil
11-01-2007, 06:58 AM
Interesting aash. The shortness makes it feel like a fragment from a lost civilization that archaelogists stumbled on, like it should have been part of a longer work, but it still complete on its own. I think though grammatically this "As much he wants" should be "As much as he wants".