Feeling of Poison

[manny2]

The touch of heartache
A feeling of poison
life without breathing
panicking for air

Just one taste is all I ask
Of fresh clean brisk air
Gasping in the light
People circling around
Doing nothing but blank stares

No help around
With their cigarettes in hand
Watching as I inhale;
The death of tumbling smoke

Flowing into my lungs
Dark and empty I stand
Clouds of smoke;
My lungs are full
But cigarettes stay lit
With only the holders to watch me
In my despair.

[dibyendra]

Manny it's really a good one. Yes, smoking has never been a good thing in life but still people smoke just to get a momentary satisfaction. And you tried your best how you felt when you are encircled with people when you're not well with cigarette in their hand. Good going Manny. Keep up your good work ! :thumbs_up

[manny2]

Thank you... i really didnt no where i was going with it when i first started haha

[Picture]

I enjoyed it. Very good.