1995

[AimusSage]

I wrote this after spending too much time on wikipedia, please critique. :)

1995

Nostalgia in a view screen
An hour.
The decade is young
Searching.
Old age finds the hour
The decade will pass on
Giving way to a new years eve.

The TV as a reminder
A show serves up a clue
Memories.
They fill the mind with thoughts
Of yesterday and past experiences.

Wikipedia, source of knowledge.
Unveils the age of the game
The plot runs through my head
Leaving a hunger for more history.
Digging deeper.
Too deep,
I’m lost in reminiscence.



Also, please critique the following poem since it's sitting there all alone, 4th post has a revised version 2:Capture the world (http://www.online-literature.com/forums/showthread.php?t=29403)

[Niamh]

Not bad Aimus! your a poet after all!:p Thought you were going to mention loads of things from 1995 that would have had most of us go "Oh my god:lol: I remember that!!!":thumbs_up

[Pensive]

Hehe, makes me think of my fondness for this website! Good poem, Aimus! :)

[AimusSage]

Hehe, makes me think of my fondness for this website! Good poem, Aimus! :)
Thanks Pensive. It is a horrible website though, because it's too easy to get lost in :D


Not bad Aimus! your a poet after all!:p Thought you were going to mention loads of things from 1995 that would have had most of us go "Oh my god:lol: I remember that!!!":thumbs_up
Yes, it did occur to me that some might think that would happen, but I did not pick 1995 for that reason. ;)