I am part of you

[blazeofglory]

How can a day be complete without a night
How can a river fill itself without water
Everything under the sun is complementary.

How lonely would have I been without your existence.

I do not mean you are just a lover

You can be a mother or a grandmother
You can be a father figure
You can be a caretaker
You can be even a dog

You can come in thousand forms
Even you can be my God

I do not exist without you
Maybe I would be a lifeless idol without you

And you broeathed life into me
And I got a soul
You animated me

In essence I am part of you
Only mingling myself with you
I find myself in whole.

I am you and you are me
This is really an intricate relation

Maybe attaining the secret of this relation is Nirvana
For you may be the universe and I am its manifestation.

[dibyendra]

Blaze, I really loved this one. It has a true voice of lover and speaking the true relationship with true love. Keep up your good work Blaze. :thumbs_up

did you mean "breathed life" in the following line ? I guess so.


And you broeathed life into me

That's not a big mistake anyway.

[dibyendra]

Oh I forgot to state the stanzas I loved in your poem. I loved the following stanzas Blaze so much.


How can a day be complete without a night
How can a river fill itself without water
Everything under the sun is complementary.




Maybe attaining the secret of this relation is Nirvana
For you may be the universe and I am its manifestation.

:thumbs_up

[PrinceMyshkin]

As strong and heartfelt a declaration of love as I have read in a long, long time! Wonderful!

[firefangled]

Ditto on everything said so far. I really liked this.

[blazeofglory]

When I find myself reduced to a sheer nothing
Expressionlessly living like a dilapidated house
Where no one chooses to live
Yet I am a man
A man needs to outpour something
He can not remain inexpressively for ever
And when everyone withdraws from me
I corner myself and take to writing

Thought and expression is an innate attribute
I can not do away with it
Yet I am socially boycotted
Estranged and disoriented
I have a volcano of ideas
The flow of them is indeed forceful
I am not skilled enough to be an orator
Nor have I close ones to share with

I of course undergo tragedies and comedies of life
The way everyone does
I indeed have to adjust to the environs that hem me in
There is something quaking within me
Like an earthquake that has the power to shake one and all

That is what presses me to write something
To say something to those who know nothing of me
Of my weaknesses, of my flaws and frailties
I like to share ideas convulsing within me
With those who never think ill of me
And with no preoccupation and bias

I want to create a world of mine
Wherein I sow seeds of ideas

That is why I write poems
Sheer poems and nothing else.

[blazeofglory]

Ideas crop up and of course this is human nature or to put it rather differently, to think is human and maybe the power of thinking is what distinguished us as human beings. Maybe animals too think considerably but indeed not to the extent to which we do and that is why we flew to the moon, plumbed the depth of the unfathomable ocean and measured the lengths and breadths of the earth

Yet why we write poems. I do not subscribe to ideas of any theorists nor to any literary critics. Ideas churn up within me and the offshoot is this piece.

When ideas churn up within and I can not speak of them
For no one can dare to listen to them
For I can think of anything
For ideas have no bounds
It follows no religions no ideologies
Of course no taboos can restrict them
Ideas are winged things
They can take flights
For the whole sky is their domain

When it comes to expressing things that convulse within me
And that can not be constricted like prosaic things
That become very bewitchingly powerful
That needs a very strong expression
Overpoweringly that can sweep things all that it comes across.
I believe that what makes a poem

[ampoule]

How lonely would have I been without your existence.

Only mingling myself with you

A wonderful poem and I loved the two lines above (although I believe you might want to adjust the "have" and the "I").
And the line "I corner myself..." I like it.

[blazeofglory]

A wonderful poem and I loved the two lines above (although I believe you might want to adjust the "have" and the "I").
And the line "I corner myself..." I like it.

Your comments really vitalized me. I got more inspired to compose poems after reading your comments. Thank you very much.