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[Avalive]

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Night sky without stars
Where are their hideouts
Bring down the light
Withering darkness
Crave for color shades
Lonely spirits head for last orgy
Pass me by, wind’s whisper
Caress on harp from ancient coda
Travel through infinite dimensions
Decipher the secret of time
Yesterday without tales
Depth of memories
Twice deeper than the ocean
How can a fish drown in the sea
As how I drown in tears
Meditation is life long mentor
Self-taught credo kept down to a heart
Halo above my head makes me no angel
Without wings, still far from heaven
Knock of morrow without birds’ tweets
Where have they gone
Shattered nature, a place we call home
Sins are not burning but thriving
Faith, love and hopes
Take them along, sword of triumph
May sun shine on, sharpen it strong
Proud of my human trait that makes me fade
Sacrifice my blood to redemption
On holy altar, my head, my heart
Weightless vows evanesce with clouds
At the moment, all can be replayed
All can be redeemed

[Koa]

I like it...it has that 'mysterious', almost disturbing traits that I tend to appreciate. Looks well written too :)

[amuse]

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Night sky without stars
Where are their hideouts

Withering darkness
Crave for color shades
Lonely spirits head for last orgy

Caress on harp from ancient coda

Yesterday without tales
Depth of memories
Twice deeper than the ocean

Shattered nature, a place we call home
Sins are not burning but thriving

love the harp one. the lonely spirits cracked me up, but it's also really sad/pathetic/gripping.
the whole "yesterday" to "ocean" bit is excellent - great flow.
i like how it starts on a sort of ephemeral note, then covers so much ground...