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The1TheOnlyJP
10-22-2007, 05:47 AM
Like a terribly wounded spirit grasping onto mere hope.

Like the beating of a hero's heart fueled by never ending courage.

Like the mind of a murderer alone in knowing truth.

Like people rushing to work not always taking notice.

Like a tree in Autumn slowly falling apart.

Like waves crashing against rocks continuously reaching further.

Like clouds in the sky always floating without dismay.

Like a star in space sometimes bright but forever fading.

Like craters on the moon filled with arrant emptiness.

I am.

blp
10-22-2007, 07:55 PM
Nice format. It could be simpler to good effect. I mean the people rushing and tree in Autumn ones are the best.

symphony
10-22-2007, 11:43 PM
Hmm its always nice to see how people see themselves :p . It's a nice poem.

And WELCOME by the way. ;)