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Lote-Tree
10-22-2007, 04:54 AM
Tale told by an Idiot

Dedicated to Manolia

"But I love you"

"Get lost you idiot!" she screams at him. The mesmerising brown eyes and lips are dancing with expletives while her white Gypsy dress flaps around her beautiful figure.

"But I love you"

"If I hear that again I swear I am going to super-glue your lips!"

"But I love..." he stops. His mouth moves but no sound comes. The sea air is playing with his black curly locks. The seaguls are flying above their heads in the blue sky.

“Listen I have to tell you something”. He runs after her like a dog that has been unleashed.

“I don’t want to hear it!”

“But it is a story.”

“I don’t want to hear a story from you! Do you not understand this?

“But it is a Tale Told by an Idiot” he says smiling, the smiling for which he received the one and only compliment from her. Even though she said it in an insulting way “you look ugly as sin but you have a wonderful smile” he treasured it as a fond memory.

“Not that again!” she stops walking and turns and glares at him.

“But I haven’t told you a story before” he pleads to her like a child.

“You and your stories and poetry, I don’t give a damn about them"!

“Hey that’s unfair"! He says still smiling. "You said you liked them."

“It was out of pity!” She turns away from him and stares at the sea.

“I enjoyed your pity” he said smiling. “But my story is about a beautiful princess who falls in love with an idiot.”
She turns around and smiles at him. A perfect smile, a beauty-queen smile; for this smile he has come to this beach over and over again searching for it in the rock pools, in the clouds, in the air, amongst the gulls flying above, in the sun and in the twilight. Even in his dreams and in his daily imaginings too, he searched for that smile hoping to hold it in his arms, to hold it against his soul.

“I like a Princess story” she says “so tell me it I am willing to hear. I hope it has a happy ending”

“All beautiful Princess stories tend to have happy ending” he said, still with a smile but this time it had line of sadness about it “here you can read it for yourself” and he brings out from his pocket a folded paper and hands it to her. He can feel the pain now in his hands in his finger tips and even in his toes, cursing throughout his body like electricity. For the first time she hugs him. He feels her warmth and her perfume intoxicates him. She lets go and run towards the hotel. Though the sea is calm behind him but inside it is raging. Huge tides rise and crash against the rocks in vain. He feels little dizzy. He catches his reflection on the pool of water. An urge comes to him to stamp on it hard; to wipe it out. But he resists but crouches down and reaches out and grabs the shell from the water and opens it. Inside he finds a shiny pearl.

AuntShecky
10-22-2007, 12:45 PM
Hmmm.
Couple o comments: 1. You may have stumbled upon a psychological truth, one that is fairly epidemic in our modern age which believes in "romantic love," as opposed to arranged marriages, etc. That is, there is an assumption that the beloved should automatically love the person in return merely because that person loves him or her. Many of our recent movies turn on that delusion; Endless Love, for instance. I'm not in favor of arranged marriages at all, and realize that "romantic" infatuation can work. Still, self-absorption seems to be behind much of contemporary human behavior. What say you?
2. I loved the image/analogy that closes the piece. An oyster can't produce a pearl unless a bit of sand, an irritant, gets under his mantle. From adversity comes creativity.
Good job on this story.
By the bye, when I was a teeny tiny lass a popular song from an even earlier decade was revived for the pop charts.
Don't remember the artist/musician but the song was "A Pretty Girl is Like a Melody," which inspired one of the greatest parodies of the last century: "A Gritty Pearl is like
a Malady."

Lote-Tree
10-22-2007, 01:20 PM
Hmmm.
Couple o comments: 1. You may have stumbled upon a psychological truth, one that is fairly epidemic in our modern age which believes in "romantic love," as opposed to arranged marriages, etc.


Arranged marriages as practiced in many parts of this world in many cases is an injustice. And it is the women that mainly suffers.

Romantic Love can be a pointer to a deeper understanding of love.



That is, there is an assumption that the beloved should automatically love the person in return merely because that person loves him or her.


I think we are born with this sense. But through love lessons we realise you can't make someone love you. This is the bitter truth.



Still, self-absorption seems to be behind much of contemporary human behavior. What say you?


It is perhaps. But it can also lead to selflessness too?

manolia
10-22-2007, 03:01 PM
Errrrmmm..thanks for the dedication Lote :) (you made my day -which was otherwise horrible by the way :( ). You made me smile :)
I liked the story :) especially the ending :thumbs_up

Lote-Tree
10-22-2007, 03:04 PM
Errrrmmm..thanks for the dedication Lote :) (you made my day -which was otherwise horrible by the way :( ). You made me smile :) I liked the story :) especially the ending :thumbs_up

He he :D Bueno!

That's for liking my stories more than my poetry. But you being a civil engineer I would not hold it against you for not liking my poetry :D ;-) He he :D