Teach Me, My Mystic Dancer

[Xillus_Xavier]

Teach Me, My Mystic Dancer

Candle dancer burning bright
Entertains my eyes tonight
Wick and wax provides a song
Flicking flame - it sways along

Mystic beats within the flow
Rythmic moves - I do not know
Teach me flame, this prance you do
For I would love to dance with you

[ampoule]

I like this double X. I have spent my share of time staring into a candle's flame. You captured it well.

[andave_ya]

This is fantastic -- lovely cadence. I can just see myself sitting in the dark, watching the candle flame dance.