I am fed up

[blazeofglory]

We piece together fragments of memories
To weave them into a poem
But they can not be a good poem
To move readers
We build a home so that we can live together
But that home cannot hold us together

We dream of a secure and happy future
But that future comes but with no security and happiness

we imagine of setting up a happy and united family
But that family never understand why they should live together

I sow seeds in the soil of tomorrows
But the seeds rot and decay before they germinate

I feel I am making a castle on the sand of ideals

All my dreams, hopes,imaginations are full of uncertainties.

They are rubles of water and vanish in a while.

I am really fed up weaving hopes.

I am simply fed up.

[dibyendra]

This is so great one Blaze, mixed with hopes and fears. This is what we learn from life Blaze.

These lines really moved me



We build a home so that we can live together
But that home cannot hold us together


we imagine of setting up a happy and united family
But that family never understand why they should live together



I feel I am making a castle on the sand of ideals

Remember Blaze that nothing last forever and everything has to come into the end. All we human being can do is dream and dream and try to make them real. Reality bites but we have to accept what it brings. We cannot escape from reality, and it is different from what we dream.

You've written really a good poem Blaze. Keep up your good work. I really appreciate your effort. :thumbs_up

[blazeofglory]

This is so great one Blaze, mixed with hopes and fears. This is what we learn from life Blaze.

These lines really moved me



We build a home so that we can live together
But that home cannot hold us together


we imagine of setting up a happy and united family
But that family never understand why they should live together



I feel I am making a castle on the sand of ideals

Remember Blaze that nothing last forever and everything has to come into the end. All we human being can do is dream and dream and try to make them real. Reality bites but we have to accept what it brings. We cannot escape from reality, and it is different from what we dream.

You've written really a good poem Blaze. Keep up your good work. I really appreciate your effort. :thumbs_up

Dib, your comments are really inspiring and encouraging. You too a are a wonderful poet and that is why you can say that much, penetratingly of course.You can plumb the depth of the matter. Your own poem affirms this notion.

[dibyendra]

Dib, your comments are really inspiring and encouraging. You too a are a wonderful poet and that is why you can say that much, penetratingly of course.You can plumb the depth of the matter. Your own poem affirms this notion.

Thank you Blaze for appreciating my comment. I'm glad to hear your kind words and appreciation. And Happy Vijaya Dashami 2064 Blaze.

२०६४ सालको शुभ विजया दशमीको उपलक्ष्यमा तपाईँ र तपाईँको परिवारको उत्तरोत्तर प्रगतिको कामना गर्दै यो चाडले सबैको जीवनमा सुख, शान्ति, समृद्धि तथा उन्नती ल्याओस् भन्ने हार्दिक मंगलमय शुभकामना गर्दछु । सबै घर दैलोमा दशैँको खुसियाली छाओस् र माता दुर्गाको आशिषले सबै नेपालीहरूको कल्याण गरोस् ।

आगामी दिनहरूमा हाम्रो देशमा शान्ति छाओस् र प्रगतिको बाटोमा सदा अग्रसर रहन सकोस् ।

शुभेच्छा सहित,
दिब्येन्द्र