Bruised and beaten

[sycho_warrior]

Beaten and bruised
I lay down my trials and tribulations
At the feet of the Lord
Oh may an answer come
May His will be done
For he knows best

Bruised and beaten
Feeling I can continue no more
Bruised and beaten
Lying on the floor

An immediate answer is what I need
But what I think and God knows
Are two different things
He only does what is best
Even if it hurts

Bruised and beaten
Feeling like I can continue no more
Bruised and beaten
Lying on the floor

My trust in God I put
My life, my everything
He is the safest place be
My Father, Saviour and Friend



still needs quite a bit off editing, but this is basically what it says

[amuse]

Bruised and beaten
Feeling I can continue no more
Bruised and beaten
Lying on the floor

An immediate answer is what I need
But what I think and God knows
Are two different things
My trust in God I put
My life, my everything
i like these lines. really nice.

[Miranda]

I really like this. I like the way the rhymes work and the rhythym of the words..its like a song. I also like how though bruised and beaten..there is a place of safety, trusting in ' My Father, Saviour and Friend.'