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Biggus
10-09-2007, 09:21 AM
JUST SAY

You can write it in a letter
In flowery words
On sweetly perfumed paper
And seal it with a loving kiss
You can write it in smoke
Across the clear blue sky
You can use dots and dashes
Like the old Morse code
Just say you love me

You can sing it in a song
Like a nightclub crooner
Honey covered words
Set to the music of love
You can beat it out in rhythm
On a set of bongo drums
Emblazon it on a banner
Trailing behind a biplane
Just say you love me

You can say it on the telephone
In dulcet tones
Your voice soft and sweet
To match the words of love
Say it in electric letters
On the side of an airship
Display it on a big screen
Before the match kicks off
Just say you love me

You can say it in dance
In the ballet tradition
With grace and poise
Moving like Darcy Bussle
You can send a signal in smoke
Like a Native American
You can say it in an Email
Just one line will do
You can say it in a Text
I luv u or u r m9
Just say you love me

Biggus
10-09-2007, 09:22 AM
IF I

If I were inside your head
What would I see?
Through your blue grey eyes
How would I view me?

If I were in your heart
What would I feel?
Would it beat a little faster?
When I see me?

If I was in your skin
When we made love
Would I feel electricity?
When I touch you

If I were inside your head
What would I think?
Would I know I was the one?
When I look at me?

If I were in your heart
Would it be full?
Or have an empty space
For the one you seek

If I were in your mind
Would I feel content?
Would I see someone special?
When I look at me?

If I spoke to me
With your mouth and lips
And I said I love you
Would it be the truth?

dibyendra
10-09-2007, 10:18 AM
Just say
Lovely feelings Biggus ! I think you are deeply in love with someone if I'm not wrong. Right ? ;)

dibyendra
10-09-2007, 10:27 AM
If I
Wow Biggus, yet another love poem ! Don't wait, go ahead before time flies by. Just rush and speak out loud to the one you love. It's so adorable poem Biggus. I loved this one and enjoyed a lot. :thumbs_up

Pendragon
10-09-2007, 10:35 AM
That repeated line makes this poem, Biggus! Wonderful!

dibyendra
10-09-2007, 10:43 AM
Yes, I agree with Pen regarding the repetition of line "Just say you love me". This is really wonderful Biggus ! :thumbs_up

manny2
10-09-2007, 01:54 PM
this is really good! i like it a lot, it goes together amazingly

pretty amazing, i didnt loose interest at all, kept me reading through it

Niamh
10-09-2007, 02:48 PM
mod note.Threads merged.
Beautiful Poems.:thumbs_up
I've merged the two together in one thread. Because this is a busy part of the forum there is a limit of one thread per day(see the please read sticky notice at top of forum). But if you create a single thread for all your poems you can post as many as you wont a day.:)

Biggus
07-17-2009, 08:25 AM
Thank you