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manny2
10-08-2007, 02:28 PM
So many people pretend
Say they are what their not
Live their lives just as a face
Act as others want
Call me a hypocrite
Tell me I'm fake
Maybe I am
But only to myself
Not to others

You watch and Judge
Stare and spread rumors
So is it I who is fake?
Or the one who pretends
Act as what their not
Tells nasty lies
About not a enemy, or a friend
Rather no one at all
But instead just an empty face
Who you don't know at all

Pendragon
10-08-2007, 04:29 PM
Very nice poem, but here Who you dont no at all
I think you mean "Who you don't know at all"

Pen

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