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manny2
10-08-2007, 10:01 AM
Life is about trust,
Without trust you have nothing.
No relationships, no friends, just nothing.

I trusted to easily,
Fell so hard into the lies.
Believed what you said,
Knowing none of it was true;
Just wishing it was.

You lied to me.
Said I could trust you,
But that is not true.
Although I know the truth
The lies will always be there,
Only reflecting you.

What we had is gone,
You let your lies ruin it all.
Too afraid to say the truth
But I am no better;
For I sit there and believe you
When I know better.
All you have for me is lies
Life is about trust,
Without it there is nothing.

blazeofglory
10-08-2007, 11:10 AM
Life is about trust
Without trust you have nothing
No relationships, no friends, just nothing
I trusted to easily
Fell so hard into the lies
Believed what you said
Knowing none of it was true
Just wishing it was
You lied to me
Said I could trust you
But that is not true
Although I know the truth
The lies will always be there
Only reflecting you
What we had is gone
You let your lies ruin it all
Too afraid to say the truth
But I am no better
For I sit there and believe you
When I know better
All you have for me is lies
Life is about trust
Without it there is nothing

Wow !! You are amazing. You have crafted it superbly. I has everything a poem must have, a tinge of juxtaposition, spoof and mockery. I am convinced of the truth that trusht is no not limited to truths but to lies, and this is a matter subtle indeed, and hardly can other understand this intricacy better than a poet and you proved it.

manny2
10-21-2007, 06:17 PM
thank you! it was difficult to write like that, a lot of mix ups :)