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Mir javeed
10-08-2007, 02:44 AM
SHE CAME TO ME
WHEN THERE WAS NONE
REJOICED I WAS
TO WELCOME HER
WITH OPEN ARMS

HER EYES RECIPROCATING
MY UNSTINTED LOVE


THE WORLD EXPANDED FOR ME
AS SHE CARRIED ME
FAR, FAR AND FAR AWAY
TO AN UNKNOWN DALE

SHE TRANSMUTED
MY MICROCOSM
INTO MACROCOSM

SHE MADE ME HEAR
SONGS OF LOST-INNOCENCE
UNHEARD HERETOFORE

SHE MADE ME SEE
BRUISED BEAUTY
UNNOTICED SO FAR

THE DAMSELS’ DREAMS
I SAW BETRAYED
WRENCHED SOULS
INNURED BODIES


QUESTIONING SUNKEN EYES
ANSWERING SULLEN FACES

THE WAILING OF MOTHERS
MOANING OF SISTERS
CRYING DAUGHTERS

THERE I LISTENED
MISCELLANY OF GRIEF
LITANY OF WOES

FEELINGS SOBBED UPON MY SHOULDER
AS DRAMA OF DEATH & LIFE
DEVIL’S REVELLING
BEWILDERED MY ESSENCE


OVERTAXED AND OVER BURDENED
I BROKE DOWN
TEARS TRICKLED DOWN MY FACE
RELENTLESSLY


I LOOSENED MY GRASP
AS SHE TIGHTENED HERS

JOSTLING HER ASIDE
“YOU JILT ME,” I COMPLAINED
LEAVING HER
I RAN AWAY AND FAR
ALONE, DISGUSTED, DISCLAIMED


BUT
SHEDDING HER MASK
OF BEAUTY AND INNOCENCE
SHE CRUISED OVER HEAD
BEFORE ME
TO THE HORIZON


WITH DEMONIC GRIN
SHE WHINNED
HA! HA! HA! HA!
YOU MISTOOK ME FOR YOUR DREAM


NAY, I AM NOT

I’M YOUR PAST
I’M YOUR PRESENT

I RESIDE IN YOUR CONCIOUSNESS
I OCCUPY YOUR SUBCONSCIOUS

I’LL KEEP HAUNTING YOU
ONE WAY OR THE OTHER

TILL WORDS DON’T EXHAUST
AND MISERIES DON’T DIE
ALTOGETHER

I’LL KEEP HAUNTING YOU, TILL……………………………
BY Mir Javeed

ampoule
10-08-2007, 09:56 PM
I understand being haunted.
Favorite line...'I loosened my grasp as she tightened hers'

blazeofglory
10-08-2007, 10:06 PM
SHE CAME TO ME
WHEN THERE WAS NONE
REJOICED I WAS
TO WELCOME HER
WITH OPEN ARMS

HER EYES RECIPROCATING
MY UNSTINTED LOVE


THE WORLD EXPANDED FOR ME
AS SHE CARRIED ME
FAR, FAR AND FAR AWAY
TO AN UNKNOWN DALE

SHE TRANSMUTED
MY MICROCOSM
INTO MACROCOSM

SHE MADE ME HEAR
SONGS OF LOST-INNOCENCE
UNHEARD HERETOFORE

SHE MADE ME SEE
BRUISED BEAUTY
UNNOTICED SO FAR

THE DAMSELS’ DREAMS
I SAW BETRAYED
WRENCHED SOULS
INNURED BODIES


QUESTIONING SUNKEN EYES
ANSWERING SULLEN FACES

THE WAILING OF MOTHERS
MOANING OF SISTERS
CRYING DAUGHTERS

THERE I LISTENED
MISCELLANY OF GRIEF
LITANY OF WOES

FEELINGS SOBBED UPON MY SHOULDER
AS DRAMA OF DEATH & LIFE
DEVIL’S REVELLING
BEWILDERED MY ESSENCE


OVERTAXED AND OVER BURDENED
I BROKE DOWN
TEARS TRICKLED DOWN MY FACE
RELENTLESSLY


I LOOSENED MY GRASP
AS SHE TIGHTENED HERS

JOSTLING HER ASIDE
“YOU JILT ME,” I COMPLAINED
LEAVING HER
I RAN AWAY AND FAR
ALONE, DISGUSTED, DISCLAIMED


BUT
SHEDDING HER MASK
OF BEAUTY AND INNOCENCE
SHE CRUISED OVER HEAD
BEFORE ME
TO THE HORIZON


WITH DEMONIC GRIN
SHE WHINNED
HA! HA! HA! HA!
YOU MISTOOK ME FOR YOUR DREAM


NAY, I AM NOT

I’M YOUR PAST
I’M YOUR PRESENT

I RESIDE IN YOUR CONCIOUSNESS
I OCCUPY YOUR SUBCONSCIOUS

I’LL KEEP HAUNTING YOU
ONE WAY OR THE OTHER

TILL WORDS DON’T EXHAUST
AND MISERIES DON’T DIE
ALTOGETHER

I’LL KEEP HAUNTING YOU, TILL……………………………
BY Mir Javeed

This is indeed the depth a lover plumbs when he or she falls for somebody indeed. Your poems are really sensually touching. I am moved to read a lover can go to that extent, hauntingly and passionately of course.

blazeofglory
10-08-2007, 10:23 PM
SHE CAME TO ME
WHEN THERE WAS NONE
REJOICED I WAS
TO WELCOME HER
WITH OPEN ARMS

HER EYES RECIPROCATING
MY UNSTINTED LOVE


THE WORLD EXPANDED FOR ME
AS SHE CARRIED ME
FAR, FAR AND FAR AWAY
TO AN UNKNOWN DALE

SHE TRANSMUTED
MY MICROCOSM
INTO MACROCOSM

SHE MADE ME HEAR
SONGS OF LOST-INNOCENCE
UNHEARD HERETOFORE

SHE MADE ME SEE
BRUISED BEAUTY
UNNOTICED SO FAR

THE DAMSELS’ DREAMS
I SAW BETRAYED
WRENCHED SOULS
INNURED BODIES


QUESTIONING SUNKEN EYES
ANSWERING SULLEN FACES

THE WAILING OF MOTHERS
MOANING OF SISTERS
CRYING DAUGHTERS

THERE I LISTENED
MISCELLANY OF GRIEF
LITANY OF WOES

FEELINGS SOBBED UPON MY SHOULDER
AS DRAMA OF DEATH & LIFE
DEVIL’S REVELLING
BEWILDERED MY ESSENCE


OVERTAXED AND OVER BURDENED
I BROKE DOWN
TEARS TRICKLED DOWN MY FACE
RELENTLESSLY


I LOOSENED MY GRASP
AS SHE TIGHTENED HERS

JOSTLING HER ASIDE
“YOU JILT ME,” I COMPLAINED
LEAVING HER
I RAN AWAY AND FAR
ALONE, DISGUSTED, DISCLAIMED


BUT
SHEDDING HER MASK
OF BEAUTY AND INNOCENCE
SHE CRUISED OVER HEAD
BEFORE ME
TO THE HORIZON


WITH DEMONIC GRIN
SHE WHINNED
HA! HA! HA! HA!
YOU MISTOOK ME FOR YOUR DREAM


NAY, I AM NOT

I’M YOUR PAST
I’M YOUR PRESENT

I RESIDE IN YOUR CONCIOUSNESS
I OCCUPY YOUR SUBCONSCIOUS

I’LL KEEP HAUNTING YOU
ONE WAY OR THE OTHER

TILL WORDS DON’T EXHAUST
AND MISERIES DON’T DIE
ALTOGETHER

I’LL KEEP HAUNTING YOU, TILL……………………………
BY Mir Javeed

This is indeed the depth a lover plumbs when he or she falls for somebody indeed. Your poems are really sensually touching. I am moved to read a lover can go to that extent, hauntingly and passionately of course.