Time

[dibyendra]

Time, it never turns back,
waits for no one,
aging every existence,
sheds no tears on whatever fallen with it,
carries on and on...
creating pages in the history.
We now and then flip those pages to recall
where we once lived there before...

Yesterdays, series of moments spent,
only are written on diaries,
capturing old memories
where we recall
our heroic acts, our cowardliness,
tears we cried, pains we suffered,
faces we met, faces we lost,
moments of bliss, and unforgettable memories.

Tomorrows, hidden faces of uncertainties,
they will present themselves with the time,
maybe with surprising appearances
or maybe reverberating warning bells
or maybe with shocking facts.
Our human existence, powerless on controlling time,
can only surrender to the time and circumstances...

Yesterdays are gone,
today, we are living,
and tomorrows are yet unseen.
Slowly, tomorrows will become today...
Today will turn yesterday...
Live as if tomorrow never exists
and live just for today !

[Poppy]

Very poignant words. You painted our existence here didn't you?
We should make the best of what time we have. Thanks for reminding us.

[Pendragon]

This may be your best yet, Dibby. Great start, builds nicely, strong finish. And it kept my attention all the way to the last word.

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[dibyendra]

Very poignant words. You painted our existence here didn't you?
We should make the best of what time we have. Thanks for reminding us.

Thank you so much Poppy for your kind words and your appreciation ! Yes, I tried to portray "time" relating with our human existence. And I'm very much glad to hear such pleasing words from you Poppy.


This may be your best yet, Dibby. Great start, builds nicely, strong finish. And it kept my attention all the way to the last word.



Thank you so much Pen for your pleasant comment and appreciating this poem. I'm very much glad that you liked this one.



This may be your best yet, Dibby.


Thank you so much Pen for your judgment. :)

[manny2]

that was really good, speaks the truth :) very nice finish

[blazeofglory]

Time, it never turns back,
waits for no one,
aging every existence,
sheds no tears on whatever fallen with it,
carries on and on...
creating pages in the history.
We now and then flip those pages to recall
where we once lived there before...

Yesterdays, series of moments spent,
only are written on diaries,
capturing old memories
where we recall
our heroic acts, our cowardliness,
tears we cried, pains we suffered,
faces we met, faces we lost,
moments of bliss, and unforgettable memories.

Tomorrows, hidden faces of uncertainties,
they will present themselves with the time,
maybe with surprising appearances
or maybe reverberating warning bells
or maybe with shocking facts.
Our human existence, powerless on controlling time,
can only surrender to the time and circumstances...

Yesterdays are gone,
today, we are living,
and tomorrows are yet unseen.
Slowly, tomorrows will become today...
Today will turn yesterday...
Live as if tomorrow never exists
and live just for today !

Wow!!this is really a nice poem. Your poem indeed reminisces Devakota's poems. You proved your height of imagination. Just about time you could write this much. This is what makes a poet.

[dibyendra]

that was really good, speaks the truth :) very nice finish

Thank you Manny for your comment ! I'm glad to hear that you liked this one. It's so good to hear from you all that this has a good finishing and this one speaks the truth ;).


Wow!!this is really a nice poem. Your poem indeed reminisces Devakota's poems. You proved your height of imagination. Just about time you could write this much. This is what makes a poet.

Thanks Blaze for appreciating this poem. Oh Blaze, I'm not aware of that poem of Devkota. Would you like to provide me the title of that poem ? And, I'm very glad to hear your kind words Blaze. Thank you !

[Gadget Girl]

WOW!!! I like it so much! I'm inspired! I wanna right a poem just like this! Good job there, Dib! I wanna see more of your poems!

[ampoule]

This is wonderful Diby. Would you add it to the 'and the word is' thread under poetry games and contests. It fits perfectly with our current word....TIME. ;)

[dibyendra]

WOW!!! I like it so much! I'm inspired! I wanna right a poem just like this! Good job there, Dib! I wanna see more of your poems!

Thank you so much Gadget Girl for your appreciation ! Yes, I'll write this kind of poems again if this poem is really an inspirational one. I like writing this kind of poems but everything depends on mood :yawnb: . Right ?


This is wonderful Diby. Would you add it to the 'and the word is' thread under poetry games and contests. It fits perfectly with our current word....TIME. ;)

Thank you so much Amp for admiring this one ! Yes, I have added this one in poetry games and contest as per your suggestion.

Let's see what others think about this poem. ;)