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CdnReader
10-05-2007, 05:24 AM
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reflections
what if
you could look in a mirror
and see reflected there
surrounding you
all of the people
you’ve loved
what if
you could look in a pond
and see hidden in the ripples
backs turned
all of the people
you’ve hurt
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Granny5
10-05-2007, 07:25 AM
I bet both reflections would be of the same people. I like this one. It makes me think.
ampoule
10-05-2007, 07:41 AM
POW! This really socked it to me Cdn. Very good.
I'm glad you put it that way. I don't know what I would do if it was the other way around.
dibyendra
10-05-2007, 08:57 AM
Wow! It's more than a poem to me. Usually this kind of feelings makes me ponder for hours and hours and you have expressed them so beautifully. Great cdn. :thumbs_up
CdnReader
10-05-2007, 09:39 AM
Thanks, everyone. Glad you like this one! :)
Pendragon
10-05-2007, 09:59 AM
I agree. This one is a "hit you where you live" poem. A challange to change your way of thinking...
CdnReader
10-05-2007, 01:56 PM
Thanks very much, Pen. :)
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