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AuntShecky
10-04-2007, 11:41 AM
What Time Is It?

I
It’s after pots and pans clattering and before
the tail-end of prime time; not
homework time or snack time or play time
(for little ones it’s way past bedtime.)

II
We know where our children are
and it’s a bit of a way to go
‘til that magical witching hour

III
It’s a tad too late to go out,
a bit too early to say good night.

IV
You're in a spot between home and out,
in the ballpark but you haven't made it
to first base. Should you
finish your drink and call it a night
or order a round and go all the way?

V
I dunno.
I don't know – what time is it?

VI
It’s that odd guest
who squeezes his backend into a seat
at the table of the seasons, prompting
Mother Nature into fixing
an extra plate.

VII
It’s that wishy-washy phase of a woman’s
life when she’s not a spicy
little number any more, no more fun flair
or fan fare but not ready for
a walker and a dish of bland fare.

VIII
It’s fair-to middlin’.
If it were music, it would be
middle- of- the- road, if it were
a color, it would be beige. If it were
a city, it would be Omaha.

IX
Not the shank, it’s the hump already.
It’s the drab ol’ nothin’ happenin’
Wednesday of the night.

X
It’s half past whatever,
a quarter to shrug.
wasted a whole damn evening again.


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Lote-Tree
10-04-2007, 12:27 PM
Time to write Poetry? :D

Virgil
10-04-2007, 12:34 PM
Hmm, I must say I have mixed feelings on this Aunty. An awful lot of cliches, but i guess the point is to bring up all those cliches, and the shear volume creates its own intensity. I will say I liked these two stanzas best, probably because of their originality:

VIII
It’s fair-to middlin’.
If it were music, it would be
middle- of- the- road, if it were
a color, it would be beige. If it were
a city, it would be Omaha.

IX
Not the shank, it’s the hump already.
It’s the drab ol’ nothin’ happenin’
Wednesday of the night.

Nicely done, nonetheless, with a strong confident voice.

symphony
10-04-2007, 12:42 PM
It’s half past whatever,
a quarter to shrug.
sounds nice :p

Pendragon
10-05-2007, 10:22 AM
I actually like the line "Wednesday of the night". That's a line an ole boy like me can relate to in a hurry.

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AuntShecky
10-05-2007, 02:24 PM
thanks for your comments, folks!
Auntie

Lote-Tree
10-05-2007, 02:32 PM
Ah Fly By Night Auntie...been to your blog...but it's all politics...Auntie politics is soooooo boring :D...I wanted to comment but you have to have an AOL account :-(

Blog here Auntie Ji?

AuntShecky
10-06-2007, 03:32 PM
Aw. Lote-Tree it's not all politics, but when it is I give it to both sides with both barrels (to use a cliché, encore.)But it's supposed to be ha, ha funny, not boring! How come Jay Leno and his ilk can joke about poly ticks?
Sometimes it's sports and other aspects of pop culture in my country that has her priorities somewhat askew.
I don't have a blog here yet, but I am thinking about it, and if I do find that I have the time, it will be for literature, artsy type topics.
yr fly by night auntie

Granny5
10-06-2007, 05:01 PM
Aw. Lote-Tree it's not all politics, but when it is I give it to both sides with both barrels (to use a cliché, encore.)But it's supposed to be ha, ha funny, not boring! How come Jay Leno and his ilk can joke about poly ticks?
Sometimes it's sports and other aspects of pop culture in my country that has her priorities somewhat askew.
I don't have a blog here yet, but I am thinking about it, and if I do find that I have the time, it will be for literature, artsy type topics.
yr fly by night auntie

I love your blog, Auntie. I've enjoyed the ones I've had time to read so far. I'll get to all of them at some point. I think you should start one here.

Lote-Tree
10-06-2007, 05:26 PM
I don't have a blog here yet, but I am thinking about it, and if I do find that I have the time, it will be for literature, artsy type topics.
yr fly by night auntie

I shall wait for your blog here :D