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Danik 2016
06-21-2025, 02:51 PM
Very interesting poem. I didn't know he was so political. Just wondering though if there are pink oranges in France ;).

"Katya tells me at the Krispy Kreme"."The Edge" by Carolene Kurien
http://www.versedaily.org/2023/theedge.shtml

tailor STATELY
06-21-2025, 06:21 PM
Pink orange: Prolly so... when I read the poem I thought of the blood orange: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Blood_orange

Loved this poem, a powerful payoff at the end: "I cannot engage in deep talk."... "Mouthless Lover, let me give you my lips. / Let's taste the world until we slip." :)

In honor of Winter in S.P. (minus the snow of course):

"Let sky's soft crush come in sleep." - Jeffrey Bean; Snow Prayer... https://www.versedaily.org/2022/snowprayer.shtml

Danik 2016
06-21-2025, 08:00 PM
Blood orange, never saw the like. On keeps learning things when traveling, even if the traveling is digital :) .

Enjoyed the poem, much of it might be São Paulo "Please a museum of smoke, a hall of rooftops.". But alas no huddling squirrels" And you forget the music sounding from everywhere and the eternally coughing people.

"My mother did not talk to fire,"."Fire Bug" by Jane Rosemberg La Forge
http://www.versedaily.org/2024/firebug.shtml

tailor STATELY
06-21-2025, 08:22 PM
"music sounding from everywhere" :)

An interesting family dynamic... Enjoyed :)

"Nothing. When we realized you weren’t here" - Tom Wayman; Did I Miss Anything? ... https://www.loc.gov/programs/poetry-and-literature/poet-laureate/poet-laureate-projects/poetry-180/all-poems/item/poetry-180-013/did-i-miss-anything/

Danik 2016
06-22-2025, 07:36 AM
Enjoyed this cryptic poem.

"One mouth eats the hand that feeds it."."Cerberus" by Maggie Dietz
https://www.versedaily.org/2024/cerberus.shtml

By the way: for the first time today when I opened your links I was checked if I was human.

tailor STATELY
06-22-2025, 11:03 AM
Congratulations ! I get asked quite often :)

Interesting Cerberus poem... Enjoyed :)

"Push where the entrance" - Justin Sherwood; Interior with Sky... https://www.versedaily.org/2018/interiorwithsky.shtml

Danik 2016
06-22-2025, 05:44 PM
Lol!

Poem by a poet with "q" in the name:
"Moon of hunger, moon of hope, moon of cold nights"."The Moon in Drag" by Kelly McQuain
http://www.versedaily.org/2023/themoonindrag.shtml

tailor STATELY
06-22-2025, 08:03 PM
Many moons... missed a few. Enjoyed :)

"Rain fell in a post-romantic way." - Matthea Harvey; I May After Leaving You Walk Quickly or Even Run... https://readalittlepoetry.com/2011/03/17/i-may-after-leaving-you-walk-quickly-or-even-run-by-matthea-harvey/

Danik 2016
06-23-2025, 07:46 AM
Enjoyed the poem! Love this kind of post modern poetry with its implied meanings.

"so she neighed extravagantly at recess, dashed full-tilt, leaned far back,"Alice believed she was a horse" by B. Fulton Jennes
https://www.versedaily.org/2025/alicebelievedshewasahorse.shtml

tonywalt
06-23-2025, 08:50 AM
The birds were being so bizarre today,
we stood static and listened to them insane
in their winter shock of sweet gum and ash.
We swallow what we won’t say: Maybe
it’s a warning. Maybe they’re screaming
for us to take cover. ( by ada limon)

tailor STATELY
06-23-2025, 12:10 PM
2-worthy poems... enjoyed both :)

"upended umbrella" - Laura Purdie Salas; You're Invited... https://laurasalas.com/poems-for-teachers/umbrella-chandelier-15-words-less-poems/

Danik 2016
06-23-2025, 09:50 PM
Lol! Enjoyed this kind of awakening of the poetic brain! :)


"Volcanoes spit out clouds of teachers."."An Old Man Asleep" by John Surowiecki

http://www.versedaily.org/2022/anoldmanasleep.shtml

tailor STATELY
06-24-2025, 07:00 AM
A dream. Enjoyed :)

"Who, if I cried out, would hear me among the Angels’" - Rainer Maria Rilke; The First Elegy... https://www.alinastefanescuwriter.com/blog/2024/3/3/q209tlmrn252tvvp5duvo4bg7gf0cq

Danik 2016
06-24-2025, 08:29 AM
Grappling with eternity. Wonderful and terrible.

Laborious poem of a poet with "X" in her name.

"Reuniting was the sound of spoons clattering into drawer, of water swishing into bathtub, of broom brushing" . "Listening for Truths & Answers" by Shuly Xóchitl Cawood
https://www.versedaily.org/2023/listeningfortruths&answers.shtml

tailor STATELY
06-24-2025, 09:02 AM
Raw emotion in the interplay... Enjoyed :)

"Yellow is the most" - Kay Ryan; Yellow... https://elabraveandtrue.com/2020/09/14/encourage-distance-learners-with-creative-color-poems/

tonywalt
06-24-2025, 11:31 AM
Z is for zenith, or what we’ll never reach,
a sky without its limit, a life uncontained—
though here we are, pretending to ascend,
feet fixed to earth, calling the climb a flight.

By carl phillips ( i would not have guessed i would find a poem beginning with "z"

Danik 2016
06-24-2025, 03:46 PM
That is always a feat, Tony! Enjoyed the poem!

"All summer, I watched moose"."Solstice " by Megan Pinto
https://www.versedaily.org/2025/solstice.shtml

Loved the poem "Yellow", tailor, it inspired this attempt:

Blue
Blue,
Soft brother
of Imperial yellow.
Where yellow is haughty,
blue is mild.
If yellow is the sun
blue is the sky.
Blue is the wide sea,
yellow the golden maize.
Yellow is acid,
blue is sad,
but together they
engender
hopeful green.

tailor STATELY
06-24-2025, 06:58 PM
Z poems are rare... I believe someone wrote a book listing a number of them :)

Love your poem Danik 2016 :) We have a color poem thread on LitNet somewhere that has not been utilized for some time/years... maybe I'll do a search.

Solstice: "I pull silk / over my eyes, coax myself into dream, / where I cross a mossy forest floor / in reverie, the light dappling fallen trees."... Wonderful !

"Beloved! amid the earnest woes" - Edgar Allan Poe; To F--... https://allpoetry.com/To-F--

Danik 2016
06-24-2025, 11:06 PM
Thanks!

"Come closer."."The House of Freaks" by Nancy Miller Gomez
http://www.versedaily.org/2024/houseoffreaks.shtml

tailor STATELY
06-25-2025, 08:55 AM
Lol... not quite surreal but odd in a good way... Enjoyed :)

"DIM-BERRIED is the mistletoe" - Walter de la Mare; Before Dawn... https://allpoetry.com/poem/8494387-Before-Dawn-by-Walter-de-la-Mare

tonywalt
06-25-2025, 11:23 AM
https://wordsfortheyear.com/2020/05/08/morning-poem-by-mary-oliver/ Morning Poem” by Mary Oliver

Every morning
the world
is created.
Under the orange

sticks of the sun
the heaped
ashes of the night
turn into leaves again

tailor STATELY
06-25-2025, 05:40 PM
Delightful poem by Mary... Enjoyed :)

"Fame's an Echo, Prattling double," - John Milton; Fame's an Echo... https://www.lieder.net/lieder/get_text.html?TextId=159311

Danik 2016
06-25-2025, 09:44 PM
Enjoyed these both so different poems.

"Gnats drowned in the cat's water dish"."A Few Things I Learned This Week" by Lana H. Ayers
http://www.versedaily.org/2024/afewthingsilearnedthisweek.shtml

tailor STATELY
06-26-2025, 08:16 AM
Interesting observations... enjoyed :)

"Halfway between crib and cage the French " - Francis Ponge; Crate... https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/poems/89710/crate

Danik 2016
06-26-2025, 09:48 PM
Curious this poetic interest of Ponge in fruit and related objects. He was middle class, a banker's son. So no farm, agriculture or market.

"If music is the sound between" ."If music is the sound between" by Svetlana Litvinchuck
https://www.versedaily.org/2025/ifmusicisthesoundbetween.shtml

tailor STATELY
06-27-2025, 07:48 AM
A lot to take in of family dynamics... remembrances and metaphors... Enjoyed :)

"July, when monsoon's gentle roar, " - Vinaya Joseph; July... https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/july-1/

Danik 2016
06-27-2025, 03:43 PM
Enjoyed this take on July


"Kingsolver tells young writers to stop smoking"."The Vault" by Dan Albergotti
http://www.versedaily.org/2022/thevault.shtml

tailor STATELY
06-27-2025, 05:17 PM
Good advise albeit an ambiguous conclusion in the last case... was he content to have vaulted or wished he hadn't ?

"Lark, skylark, spilling your rubbed and round" - Cecil Day Lewis; The Ecstatic... https://allpoetry.com/The-Ecstatic

Danik 2016
06-27-2025, 11:30 PM
The Ecstatic -Enjoyed form and images by Day Lewis

"My heart leaps up when I behold"."My heart leaps up" by William Wordsworth
https://allpoetry.com/My-Heart-Leaps-Up

tailor STATELY
06-28-2025, 07:17 AM
Rainbows :) Also enjoyed the image.

"napping place for dog" - Susan Taylor Brown; Hummingbird Sage... https://www.backup.susantaylorbrown.com/national-poetry-month-haiku-29-hummingbird-sage/

Danik 2016
06-28-2025, 08:44 AM
Lol! Cryptic children rhymes

"One morning my mother laid her body across the driveway" "Garage" by Kaylee Young-Eun Jeong
https://www.versedaily.org/2025/garage.shtml

tailor STATELY
06-28-2025, 03:42 PM
Tragic moment in time for a child to witness... enjoyed this little vignette :)

"Pizza again" - Harold r Hunt Sr; Pizza Again... https://hellopoetry.com/poem/961650/pizza-again/

tonywalt
06-28-2025, 05:19 PM
could only find a title, sorry- .

Questions of Travel” by Elizabeth Bishop

Questions of Travel
There are too many waterfalls here; the crowded streams
hurry too rapidly down to the sea,
and the pressure of so many clouds on the mountaintops
makes them spill over the sides in soft slow-motion,
turning to waterfalls under our very eyes.
—For if those streaks, those mile-long, shiny, tearstains,
aren't waterfalls yet,
in a quick age or so, as ages go here,
they probably will be.
But if the streams and clouds keep travelling, travelling,
the mountains look like the hulls of capsized ships,
slime-hung and barnacled.

Think of the long trip home.
Should we have stayed at home and thought of here?

https://allpoetry.com/Questions-of-Travel

Danik 2016
06-28-2025, 05:23 PM
Enjoyed this poem. After all everyone got a party¡


Poem by a poet with "Q" in her nam

"At sixteen"."By the Light of the Moon" by Peg Quinn
http://www.versedaily.org/2021/bythelightofthemoon.shtml

tonywalt
06-29-2025, 07:11 AM
second word,

I Remember, I Remember

by Thomas Hood

I remember, I remember
The house where I was born,
The little window where the sun
Came peeping in at morn;
He never came a wink too soon
Nor brought too long a day;
But now, I often wish the night
Had borne my breath away.

tailor STATELY
06-29-2025, 07:11 AM
Sad poem of the Viet Nam war era. Thought 'beckoning' might be better than 'beaconing' at the end. Enjoyed otherwise :)

Lol... another tie... Enjoyed "I Remember"

"Radiant rays, rising sun,"- Mutahir Ahsan; Radiant Rays... https://vocal.media/poets/radiant-rays

Danik 2016
06-29-2025, 09:15 AM
Enjoyed both "r" poems.
Absolutely agree with "beckoning" some slip of the pen.

"I remember"- sweetly nostalgic

"Seeing is not imaging"."What is it like to be a bat" by Cheryl Moskowitz
https://www.versedaily.org/2025/whatisitliketobeabat.shtml

tailor STATELY
06-29-2025, 10:51 AM
"pipistrelle" and "qualia" are new to me... Enjoyed :)

"Tell all the Truth but tell it slant —" - Emily Dickinson; Tell all the Truth but tell it slant... https://allpoetry.com/Tell-all-the-Truth-but-tell-it-slant

Danik 2016
06-29-2025, 09:01 PM
Also to me!

"Under the rose-tree's dancing shade"."Le Panneau" by Oscar Wilde
https://allpoetry.com/Le-Panneau

tailor STATELY
06-30-2025, 06:05 AM
Enjoyed the dream quality of the poem :)

"Vincent! There is no living star so sweet" - Stephanie Cynthia; Vincent... https://hellopoetry.com/poem/1616181/vincent/

Danik 2016
06-30-2025, 09:53 PM
Enjoyed! At some points I got the feeling that the poet makes sacrifices to rhythm and rhyme, but on the whole it is a fine homage to van Gogh.


"What exists in the shadow of a thing"."First Image of a Black Hole" by Jason Gray
https://www.versedaily.org/2025/firstimageofablackhole.shtml

tailor STATELY
07-01-2025, 07:54 AM
Interesting mix of the metaphysical with science... Enjoyed :)

Poem with an 'x' in its title:

"Some prowl sea-beds, some hurtle to a star" - Dannie Abse; X-ray... https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/poems/34137/x-ray-56d21793976b8

Danik 2016
07-01-2025, 08:56 AM
A very touching poem!

"you wash your hands slowly, in daydream and water."."self-portrait as a child in america" by Esther Ra
http://www.versedaily.org/2023/selfportraitasachildinamerica.shtml

tailor STATELY
07-01-2025, 10:00 AM
*pop* imaginative poem... Enjoyed :)

Poem title with a 'z' in it:

"'No poetry before' - Filippo Tommaso Marinetti; Zang Tumb Tumb (usually referred to as Zang Tumb Tuuum)... https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zang_Tumb_Tumb

Danik 2016
07-01-2025, 05:56 PM
One of your great finds, tailor, :). I heard a lot about Marinetti, but never about Zang Tumb, Tumb or Zang Tumb, Tuuum. He influenced the Brazilian modernists too, who started to pay attention to the sound of the words.


"A tiny hut that seems to be"."Gamzrdeli" by Akaki Tsereteli
https://allpoetry.com/Gamzrdeli

tailor STATELY
07-02-2025, 01:35 AM
A tragic tale of treachery. Enjoyed :)

"Begin again to the summoning birds" - Brendan Kennelly; Begin... https://wfupress.wfu.edu/poem-of-the-week/poem-of-the-week-begin-by-brendan-kennelly/

Danik 2016
07-02-2025, 08:18 AM
Enjoyed this poem so much!

"CALM was the day, and through the trembling air"."Prothalamion" by Edmund Spenser
https://allpoetry.com/Prothalamion

tailor STATELY
07-02-2025, 04:56 PM
Purity, light, and beauty... the time before the swans' wedding... a beautiful poem :)

"Dark is the forest and deep, and overhead'' - Edward Thomas; The Dark Forest... https://allpoetry.com/The-Dark-Forest

Danik 2016
07-02-2025, 10:35 PM
:)

Enjoyed The Dark Forest!


"Eyes that last I saw in tears"."Eyes that last I saw in tears" by T. S. Elliot
https://allpoetry.com/Eyes-That-Last-I-Saw-In-Tears

tailor STATELY
07-03-2025, 05:29 AM
Haunting poem... Enjoyed :)

"Forgive me" - F.J. Bergmann; An Apology... https://www.loc.gov/programs/poetry-and-literature/poet-laureate/poet-laureate-projects/poetry-180/all-poems/item/poetry-180-128/an-apology/

Danik 2016
07-03-2025, 09:19 AM
Sorry for the chickens!



"Giver of glowing light!"."Hymn to the Sun" by Thomas Hood
https://www.public-domain-poetry.com/thomas-hood/hymn-to-the-sun-20211

tailor STATELY
07-03-2025, 11:40 AM
Lol... the chickens & wheelbarrow were from the poem: The Red Wheelbarrow by William Carlos Williams... https://allpoetry.com/The-Red-Wheelbarrow

Odd rhyme scheme... Enjoyed :)

"HEARKEN, oh hearken! let your souls behind you" - Elizabeth Barrett Browning; Chorus of Eden Spirits... https://allpoetry.com/Chorus-of-Eden-Spirits

Danik 2016
07-03-2025, 10:23 PM
Oh, I see, it's a dialogue between two poems. Don't remember the Carlos William poem, but it's possible that it is part of our selection.

Here is another one:
"I've fond anticipation of a day"."The Uses of Poetry" by William Carlos Williams
https://allpoetry.com/The-Uses-Of-Poetry

tailor STATELY
07-04-2025, 07:20 AM
"O'erfilled with pure diversion presently," :) Enjoyed

"Jingle Bell Jumpers" - L.G.; Jeez jumping jehosefat... https://allpoetry.com/poem/14235901-Jingle-Bell-Jumpers--by-L.G.

Danik 2016
07-04-2025, 01:21 PM
Lol! Enjoyed the playful alliteration!

A poem by an author with "K" in her name :

"There is a woman we call Flock of Seagulls"."The Naming of Things" by Kelli Russel Agodon
http://www.versedaily.org/2024/thenamingofthings.shtml

tailor STATELY
07-04-2025, 07:26 PM
Lol... enjoyed the madness :)

"LEAVES of poplars pick Japanese prints against the west." - Carl Sandburg; Moonset... https://www.poeticous.com/carl-sandburg/moonset

Danik 2016
07-04-2025, 10:30 PM
Enjoyed the dark moonset!

"My sister and I are talking about our childhoods,"."Ode on Paradis and the Longing for a Place that Never Was" by Barbara Hamby
https://www.versedaily.org/2025/odeonparadisandthelonging.shtml

tailor STATELY
07-05-2025, 01:39 AM
Enjoyed this fickle memory tale :)

"Never a swallow wets his wing" - Cicely Fox Smith; Lavender Pond... https://allpoetry.com/Lavender-Pond

Danik 2016
07-05-2025, 10:17 AM
A very delicate poem. Enjoyed the contrasts


"O Love, dark animal,"O Love, Sweet Animal" by Delmore Schwartz
https://allpoetry.com/O-Love,-Sweet-Animal

tailor STATELY
07-05-2025, 04:08 PM
Enjoyed this poem which invokes a cat and her pet :)

"Physics says: go to sleep. Of course" - Albert Goldbarth; The Sciences Sing a Lullabye... https://readalittlepoetry.com/2011/03/20/the-sciences-sing-a-lullabye-by-albert-goldbarth/

Danik 2016
07-05-2025, 05:56 PM
A very original lullaby! Enjoyed very much!

A poem by a poet with Q in his name:

"One tree. Another tree " ."Trees" by Ai Qing
https://lorenwebster.net/2024/02/24/ai-qing-selected-poems/

tailor STATELY
07-05-2025, 07:39 PM
Wonderful poem(s) with commentary(ies) :)

"Rocks rising in one place, sinking in another," - Stuart Friebert; Slow Boil... https://www.versedaily.org/2017/slowboil.shtml

Danik 2016
07-05-2025, 11:20 PM
Very opportune poem!


"Soon they will bring"."Excavation" by Maxwell Suzuki
http://www.versedaily.org/2024/excavation.shtml

tailor STATELY
07-06-2025, 05:43 AM
... Legos... Enjoyed :)

"There are no gardens in my neighborhood," - Cameron Barnett ; Black Locusts... https://www.versedaily.org/2017/blacklocusts.shtml

Danik 2016
07-06-2025, 11:02 AM
Interesting how the poem links the trees with the four stations of the year. Enjoyed!


"Under the lone stone, the eel"."Snake Lips" by Andrew Szilvasy
http://www.versedaily.org/2021/snakelips.shtml

tailor STATELY
07-06-2025, 07:42 PM
"All pets are / imposters" :) Enjoyed.

"Violets are violet, letters are read." - Simon J. Wood; Love, Let Us!... https://simonjwood.wordpress.com/2016/02/14/valentine-acrostic-poem/

Danik 2016
07-06-2025, 11:16 PM
Nice Valentine poem!

"What should I feed the wild rabbit"."Feeding the Wild Rabbit"
https://www.versedaily.org/2025/feedingthewildrabbit.shtml

tailor STATELY
07-07-2025, 05:20 AM
Enjoyed this poem with some interesting contrasts: "Do animals dream of the coming light
in their lairs beneath the snow?"... "I dream constantly of homelessness." :)

Poem by a poet with an 'x' in their name:

" I love Tao Jingjie!" - Ouyang Xiu; Sitting at Night and Playing the Qin, I am Deeply Moved: Two Poems Sent to Shengyu (Mei Yaochen)... https://www.silkqin.com/09hist/qinshi/ouyangxiu.htm

Danik 2016
07-07-2025, 08:49 AM
Enjoyed specially the translation by Professor Chaves

"You say it doesn't mean a blessed thing,"."Sonnet with Abalone and Glue" by Robert Thomas
http://www.versedaily.org/2023/sonnetwithabaloneandglue.shtml

tailor STATELY
07-07-2025, 09:41 AM
Ocean, Moon, sea, and tide pools... a horse... and the music of Itzhak Perlman's violin
as it sings Mozart and Rachmaninoff. Enjoyed the sentiment :)

Poem by a poet who has a 'z' in their name...

"Silently and serenely, one forgets all words," - Hongzhi Zhengjue; SILENT ILLUMINATION... https://dippingintolight.com/zhengjue-hongzhi-1901/

Danik 2016
07-07-2025, 11:15 PM
Impressive poem !Deep life philosophy in a nutshell.. Enjoyed also the translation, which is more fluent than is usual with Chinese poetry.

"Awake in bed I listened to my father"."The Folk Songs of North America" by Ann Hudson
https://www.versedaily.org/2025/thefolksongsofnorthamerica.shtml

tailor STATELY
07-08-2025, 09:32 AM
Not familiar with all the folksongs, but the school references are familiar...Enjoyed this retrospective poem :)

"Because noble gases are non-reactive, have a low boiling point." - Martha Silano
Why I Want to Be a Noble Gas... https://www.theshorepoetry.org/martha-silano-why-i-want-to-be-a-noble-gas

Danik 2016
07-08-2025, 10:52 PM
Interesting poem using chemical cases as substitutes for human reactions. Enjoyed!

"cats sleep"."Like history a poem" by Stella Vinitchi Radulescu
http://www.versedaily.org/2022/likehistoryapoem.shtml

tailor STATELY
07-09-2025, 02:49 AM
Imaginative poem... some of the images are out there... Enjoyed :)

"dim" - e.e. cummings; dim/ i... https://www.lieder.net/lieder/get_text.html?TextId=39682

Danik 2016
07-09-2025, 10:03 AM
Enjoyed so much this poem that plays with words and form. One canteen the rain falling.


"Every man worth the name"."The Warner▪︎ by Baudelaire
https://allpoetry.com/The-Warner

tailor STATELY
07-09-2025, 06:22 PM
Interesting take on the "reptilian brain" and its role in humanity.

"Freedom, as every schoolboy knows," - Ambrose Bierce; Freedom... https://www.poetrynook.com/poem/freedom-29

Danik 2016
07-09-2025, 11:05 PM
An unusual take on freedom!


"God's first language is silence."."Unnaccented" by Maureen Thorson
http://www.versedaily.org/2022/unaccented.shtml

tailor STATELY
07-10-2025, 10:37 AM
Had to look up Igbo: largest ethnic groups in Africa... Enjoyed :)

"Had I the heavens' embroidered cloths," - William Butler Yeats; Aedh: He Wishes For The Cloths Of Heaven... https://allpoetry.com/aedh-wishes-for-the-cloths-of-heaven

Danik 2016
07-10-2025, 11:44 PM
On my other forum there is a young Igbo boy from Nigeria.He is a bit of a prodigy, reading about hundred books per year while also studying law.

Beautiful poem!


"In my imagination, he's played by one of the good dads"."Standing Before the Relic at the Basilica of the Holy Blood in Bruges" by James Davis May
https://www.versedaily.org/2025/standingbeforetherelic.shtml

tailor STATELY
07-11-2025, 09:18 AM
Thoughtful poem of decency and faith... Enjoyed :)

"Just now," - Adelaide Crapsey; The Warning... https://allpoetry.com/The-Warning.

Danik 2016
07-11-2025, 05:21 PM
For some reason the link presented another poem from another poet with the same title, but I found the poem. Bit uncanny reminds me of a novel where thousands of white mots danced around.

"Knew not the Sun, sweet Violet,"Brotherhood"
by John Banister Tabb
https://www.litscape.com/author/John_Banister_Tabb/Brotherhood.html

tailor STATELY
07-11-2025, 06:47 PM
Thanx - Corrected the link... LitNet truncated the trailing "." because I didn't use the url tags... my bad for not checking the link once posted.

Interesting rhyme scheme: abxbcc, adxdee, afxfgg. Found a summary here: https://allpoetry.com/poem/8571947-Brotherhood-by-John-Bannister-Tabb Enjoyed :)

"Laugh, and the world laughs with you;" - Ella Wheeler Wilcox; Solitude... https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/45937/solitude-56d225aad9924

Summary: https://www.owleyes.org/text/solitude

Danik 2016
07-11-2025, 10:13 PM
No problem!Happens so often to me.

Thanks! Didn't find it in All poetry.

"Solitude ". True enough!Enjoyed the summary too!

"most evenings find mummy pacing down cooling"."I write of my mother in the book of joy " by Saida Agostini
https://www.versedaily.org/2025/iwriteofmymotherinthebookofjoy.shtml

tailor STATELY
07-11-2025, 11:38 PM
Wonderful poem of nurturing... Enjoyed :)

"No one talks more than a Poet;" - Johann Wolfgang von Goethe; To The Kind Reader... https://allpoetry.com/To-The-Kind-Reader

Danik 2016
07-12-2025, 10:06 AM
Enjoyed the Goethe poem, didn't know it. Found the German original. The translator simplified the language taking away some of its charm.


"One man wrests a flag"."Domestic Concerns " by Lisa Ampleman.
http://www.versedaily.org/2024/domesticconcerns.shtml

tailor STATELY
07-12-2025, 04:45 PM
Enjoyed the counterpoint between men and women of "civilization" :)

"Perhaps some day the sun will shine again," - Vera Brittain; Perhaps (To R.A.L.)... https://allpoetry.com/poem/8540797-Perhaps--To-R.A.L.--by-Vera-Brittain

Danik 2016
07-12-2025, 10:32 PM
Touching poem about the endurance of loss by a female war poet, something that probably was unusual at the time of WWĺl.



"Quit it with the fear thing. Scientists can't say"."How to Survive in Earthquake Country" by Rachelle Sierra
https://www.versedaily.org/2025/howtosurviveinearthquakecountry.shtml

tailor STATELY
07-13-2025, 06:43 AM
A 'Q' poem :)

I have an app that will warn of a great shake, prolly most in California have it on their phones. Inevitably a great quake will hit, if not here then elsewhere in the world; probability says so... it's best to live not in fear but be prepared. Enjoyed :)

"RUINS of trees whose woeful arms " - George Herbert Clarke; RUINS (YPRES, 1917) ... https://www.poetryexplorer.net/poem.php?id=10048629

Danik 2016
07-13-2025, 11:32 AM
Link didn’t work for me but found the poem in Lieder. net. Terrible, forceful poem and so up to date!


"She would say she swam"."She Would Say She Swam With Her Brother" by Pamela Hobart Carter
https://www.versedaily.org/2025/shewouldsaysheswam.shtml

tailor STATELY
07-13-2025, 04:20 PM
Must be a regional thing.

Interesting tension, a survival averted... Enjoyed :)

"Turn to thy window in the silver hour" - Virna Sheard; At Dawn... https://allpoetry.com/poem/8606155-At-Dawn-by-Virna-Sheard

Danik 2016
07-13-2025, 10:24 PM
Not sure: survival or death averted?

Loved this delicate dawn poem

"Up to the star new-born in sight"."Up to the Star (version three) by Mihai Eminescu
https://allpoetry.com/poem/8566011-Up-To-The-Star--version-three--by-Mihai-Eminescu

tailor STATELY
07-14-2025, 08:09 AM
Interesting parallelism... Enjoyed :)

"Violets from Plug Street Wood," - Roland Leighton; Violets - April 1915 (1916)... https://www.poetrybyheart.org.uk/poems/violets---april-1915

Danik 2016
07-14-2025, 01:30 PM
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Danik 2016
07-14-2025, 01:42 PM
Again a poem that exposes the horrors of war. Vera Brittain, Roland's fiancée was also a war poet. See your post#3086.


"When my mother forgets the word for dahlia"."When my mother forgets the word for dahlia" by Robin Turner
https://www.versedaily.org/2025/whenmymotherforgets.shtml

tailor STATELY
07-14-2025, 05:29 PM
:)

I do not look forward to cognitive decline... perhaps it has begun to happen in subtle ways I haven't fully grasped yet; thoughtful poem on the theme... Enjoyed :)

"Xavier’s xebec xferred xenophiliacally " - Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock; Xavier’s Xebec... https://vocal.media/poets/xavier-s-xebec

Danik 2016
07-14-2025, 11:09 PM
I think as long it is subtle it is fine.

"Vocal is not available in your country" but I at least could see that all words started with X.

"Yesterday we sat on the bank of the Kamo River, laughing". "Three Poems" by Gary Young
http://www.versedaily.org/2019/threepoems.shtml

tailor STATELY
07-15-2025, 01:54 AM
:( I'm so sorry. The artwork ("Ancient Wharf" by Derek Fiechter) showed a "xebec" in the foreground with others in a golden light... the poem with all its words starting with 'x'. I found a video of instrumental music that evidently goes with the art... https://www.google.com/search?client=opera&q="Ancient+Wharf"+by+Derek+Fiechter&sourceid=opera&ie=UTF-8&oe=UTF-8#fpstate=ive&vld=cid:709001f3,vid:UCIaViwLa4Q,st:0

Then I found a Google AI blurb that might be available for you: https://www.google.com/search?q="Xavier%27s+Xebec"+poem&num=10&newwindow=1&client=opera&hs=wox&sca_esv=07bc48a71de23ee9&sxsrf=AE3TifMRY7nJC6fdb4w7gh_k1SxS2GqMVw%3A1752557 841051&ei=Eel1aL_0AuShqtsP_8qFuQI&ved=0ahUKEwj_wMHckr6OAxXkkGoFHX9lIScQ4dUDCBA&uact=5&oq="Xavier%27s+Xebec"+poem&gs_lp=Egxnd3Mtd2l6LXNlcnAiFSJYYXZpZXIncyBYZWJlYyIg cG9lbUjdQFD4ClioPHABeACQAQCYAZQKoAG9FqoBBTYtMi4xuA EDyAEA-AEBmAIDoAK7DMICDhAAGIAEGLADGIYDGIoFwgILEAAYgAQYsAM YogTCAgUQIRigAcICBRAhGKsCwgIIEAAYgAQYogSYAwCIBgGQB gaSBwUxLjUtMqAHhQeyBwM1LTK4B7IMwgcFMC4xLjLIBw0&sclient=gws-wiz-serp

Surprising poem !... Enjoyed so very much :)

Poem title starting with the letter 'z':

"Amusing, zebras zooming, mozzies abuzz," - T4ky0; Zookeeper’s Zoetrope... https://allpoetry.com/poem/17569607-Zookeeper-s-Zoetrope-by-T4ky0

Danik 2016
07-15-2025, 10:43 AM
Thanks for all that trouble, tailor. Enjoyed the music. Yes the blurb with the smiling girls opened, but I didn't quite know what to make with it.

A very ingenious aliteration poem. Enjoyed so much!

"Absolute, the sudden silence—the fan stops"."Abecedarian for the Power Outage" by Catherine Pierce.
http://www.versedaily.org/2024/abecedarianforthepoweroutage.shtml

tailor STATELY
07-15-2025, 11:05 AM
Lol... the smiling girls all direct to the poem I first linked, don't know why.

Enjoyed this Abecedarian offering :)

"Because her days were making a garden " - Brendan Kennelly; A Half-finished Garden... https://wfupress.wfu.edu/poem-of-the-week/poem-week-half-finished-garden-brendan-kennelly/

Danik 2016
07-15-2025, 10:49 PM
Enjoyed that half finished garden!


"Cabbage Night that year was bright and humid." ."Hunger" by Michael Goodfellow
http://www.versedaily.org/2022/hungry.shtml
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mischief_Night

tailor STATELY
07-16-2025, 02:07 AM
Odd tension in this poem... poltergeist ? Enjoyed :)

"Darkness is not a death, does not obliterate," - Alice B. Fogel; Forgiving the Darkness
... https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/91911/forgiving-the-darkness

Danik 2016
07-16-2025, 10:04 AM
"Hunger"? I think so.


"Each year I cut a tree sprout from the chimney" "The Donkey on the Road" by Jesse Graves
http://www.versedaily.org/2022/thedonkeyontheroad.shtml

"The donkey on the road to Brementown meets
his crew of cast-outs, no sorrier than most,
none really the musicians they pretend to be."
I think these strophe refers to this tale:https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Town_Musicians_of_Bremen

tailor STATELY
07-16-2025, 10:32 AM
A needful change of location. I remember the Brementown tale... Enjoyed :)

"Five more books in a box to be carried out to the car," - Mark Halliday; The Halls... https://www.loc.gov/programs/poetry-and-literature/poet-laureate/poet-laureate-projects/poetry-180/all-poems/item/poetry-180-095/the-halls/

Danik 2016
07-16-2025, 05:04 PM
Poem about invisibility and belonging. Enjoyed!

"Gingerly, yes,"."DRAWBRIDGE + MOAT" by Natalie Louise Tombasco
http://www.versedaily.org/2023/drawbridge+moat.shtml

tailor STATELY
07-16-2025, 05:31 PM
Evocative poem after the style of Marianne Moore... invoking Sapphic images and a secret language. A wonderful treatise of enjambment... all in all a dense wonder of a poem. Enjoyed :)

"Hour by hour I sit, " - Sappho?; A lyric (The vigil)... https://www.lieder.net/lieder/get_text.html?TextId=46338

Danik 2016
07-16-2025, 09:35 PM
Moving in its simplicity of language. Enjoyed!


"In the last year of the old drought,"."The Last Gate to an Old Life" by Romeo Oriogun
https://www.versedaily.org/2025/thelastgatetoanoldlife.shtml

tailor STATELY
07-17-2025, 04:19 AM
"while writing into sunset the sonnet / that follows every bird flying"... Enjoyed :)

"July 4th fireworks jar American nights," - Henry Allen; July: A Sonnet... https://theamericanscholar.org/july-a-sonnet/

Danik 2016
07-17-2025, 08:58 AM
I fully share the feelings conveid in the above poem.


"Killer whales have stopped reproducing.".."Why have children when the world is ending?" by Julia Kolchinsky Dasbach
http://www.versedaily.org/2023/whyhavechildrenwhen.shtml

tailor STATELY
07-17-2025, 09:31 AM
Somber poem. Brings to mind a Sci-fi story: The Screwfly Solution... https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Screwfly_Solution Enjoyed :)

"Laughter sort o' settles breakfast better than digestive pills;" - Edgar Albert Guest; Laughter... https://allpoetry.com/poem/8471207-Laughter-by-Edgar-Albert-Guest

Danik 2016
07-17-2025, 10:53 PM
It's somber indeed. There aren't many options starting with "k". As for the misogynist disease it still exists here in the tropics, by the quantities of feminicides
which appear in the news.

Enjoyed so much this poem about laughter! An antidote against so many evils.


"My wife and I rented a lake house at Cayuga Lake." ."Wanting Kids" by Bunkong Tuong
https://www.versedaily.org/2025/wantingkids.shtml

tailor STATELY
07-18-2025, 04:01 AM
"feminicide" :(

"After the room returned to speech, she read her novel / And I wrote. During lunch I read poetry to her / Between bites of sandwich and dark red cherries."... Enjoyed :)

"Nor dread nor hope attend" - William Butler Yeats; Death... https://allpoetry.com/poem/8453361-Death-by-William-Butler-Yeats

Danik 2016
07-18-2025, 05:19 PM
Synthetic and to the point.


"Overnight, it seems, the butterfly bush,"."To Stand Astonished" by Terry Kennedy
http://www.versedaily.org/2023/tostandastonished.shtml

tailor STATELY
07-18-2025, 09:45 PM
Love this... a very contemplative poem. Enjoyed :)

"People in the neighborhood called him The Writer" - Anne Pierson Wiese; The Writer... https://www.versedaily.org/2011/thewriter.shtml

Danik 2016
07-18-2025, 11:25 PM
"The Writer." A kind of short story poem. Sad but enjoyed.

A poem by a poet with a "Q " in her name:
"That we might be rootless, ruthless, industrious, dust—"Caisson" by Carol Quinn
http://www.versedaily.org/2009/caisson.shtml

tailor STATELY
07-19-2025, 02:42 AM
Enigmatic poem for me... I see death and its aftermath disjointed here... and there. Enjoyed :)

"Rust is the reliable color of" - Marilyn Yung; Rust... https://marilynyung.com/2020/08/31/an-ode-to-rust/

Danik 2016
07-19-2025, 10:23 AM
re " Caisson": Seems to me a spirit visiting earth after death.

Interesting poem and very fitting image. Never stopped to think about rust as a color that combines degradation and resilience.

"Strings slide in" . "The Cello" by Andrea Potos
http://www.versedaily.org/2022/thecello.shtml

tailor STATELY
07-19-2025, 03:00 PM
Craving a bit of Yo Yo Ma now... Enjoyed :)

"The art of losing isn’t hard to master;" - Elizabeth Bishop; One Art... https://www.literaryladiesguide.com/literary-analyses/an-analysis-of-one-art-by-elizabeth-bishop/

Danik 2016
07-19-2025, 10:51 PM
Liked the poem by EB and the analysis. Wasn’t aware that the poet herself had suffered so many severe losses.

"Under vague silver moonlight"."The Trees At Night" by William Kerr
https://www.public-domain-poetry.com/william-kerr/trees-at-night-37821

tailor STATELY
07-20-2025, 03:30 AM
"The lonely lovely trees sigh / For summer spent and gone:" Enjoyed :)

"Vultures on Route One-Six-Three, - Ron Singer; Vultures on Route 163... http://www.poetryatlas.com/poetry/poem/4737/vultures-on-route-163.html

Danik 2016
07-20-2025, 09:52 AM
Dark but true poem about predation.


"Warm-hearted shining silver lyre"."Sonnet of Homage to Manuel de Falla Offering Him Flowers" by Federico Garcia Lorca
http://www.poetryatlas.com/poetry/poem/2835/sonnet-of-homage-to-manuel-de-falla-offering-him-flowers.html
Manuel de Falla https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yeSfJiuGJQE

PS- The funny thing about poetryatlas is that sometimes the poems appear to me and other times they don't because of copyright restrictions.

tailor STATELY
07-20-2025, 06:35 PM
"clean algebra of tranquil brow,"... Enjoyed Lorca's poem and the music and dancer :)

(I forgot)

Poem by a poet with an 'x' in their name:

"Made up of tiny fibers" - Curtis X Meyer; Acrostic: Material... https://allpoetry.com/poem/2814196-Acrostic--Material-by-Curtis-X-Meyer

Danik 2016
07-20-2025, 07:13 PM
Ingenious acrostic!

It's fine . I'm using it as long as it works.


"Ye flags of Piccadilly,"."Ye Flags of Piccadilly" by Arthur Hugh Clough
http://www.poetryatlas.com/poetry/poem/993/ye-flags-of-piccadilly.html

tailor STATELY
07-20-2025, 08:09 PM
Enjoyed :) AllPoetry offers some context which was lost on me: https://allpoetry.com/Ye-Flags-of-Picadilly

"Zigzag lines" - Kathy apRoberts; Z-O-D-I-A-C... https://www.kathyaproberts.com/acrostic-poetry/

Danik 2016
07-20-2025, 10:06 PM
Thanks, on me too.

Charming acrostic!

"And we just had to show up,"."When Love was in Fashion" by Francine Witte
http://www.versedaily.org/2024/whenlovewasinfashion.shtml

tailor STATELY
07-21-2025, 07:45 AM
Beautiful poem ! Enjoyed :)

"Bloom — is Result — to meet a Flower" - Emily Dickinson; Bloom — is Result — to meet a Flower... https://www.transitionhabitat.org/blog/2023/2/13/bloom-emily-dickinson-6sjbc

Danik 2016
07-21-2025, 02:45 PM
I think this is one of the most charming poems by E D. Enjoyed poem and video very much.
Found this complement to the poem : https://www.themarginalian.org/2022/02/04/universe-in-verse-bloom/

"Consider the meteorite,"."Counterglow" by John S. Williams
http://www.versedaily.org/2020/counterglow.shtml

tailor STATELY
07-21-2025, 06:52 PM
Enjoyed The Marginalian article very much :) I used to read The Marginalian from my email once in a while but got out of the habit.

A poem of angst (depicted by Google AI as Edvard Munch's The Scream)... despair. To add a little light - I enjoyed it :)

"Depart in joy from this world's noise and strife" - Samuel Taylor Coleridge; Translation of a Latin inscription... by the Rev. W. L. Bowles in Nether-Stowey Church... http://www.poetryatlas.com/poetry/poem/5069/translation-of-a-latin-inscription.html

Danik 2016
07-21-2025, 10:33 PM
The Scream- interesting association.


A beautiful inscription!

"eighty year sleep".."On Leaving Los Angeles" by Walter Wykes
http://www.poetryatlas.com/poetry/poem/2372/on-leaving-los-angeles.html

tailor STATELY
07-22-2025, 09:35 AM
Contemporary poet/play writer... I'm clueless on what the poem means...

"For the first time, on the road north of Tampico," - Naomi Shihab Nye ; Making a Fist... ... https://www.loc.gov/programs/poetry-and-literature/poet-laureate/poet-laureate-projects/poetry-180/all-poems/item/poetry-180-063/making-a-fist/

Danik 2016
07-22-2025, 07:07 PM
re Walter Wykes: I didn't find any context or analysis.

Disturbing subtle poem about life and death. Enjoyed!


"Give up sitting dutifully at your desk. Leave". “Do You Have Any Advice For Those of Us Just Starting Out?” by Ron Koertge
https://www.loc.gov/programs/poetry-and-literature/poet-laureate/poet-laureate-projects/poetry-180/all-poems/item/poetry-180-007/do-you-have-any-advice-for-those-of-us-just-starting-out/

tailor STATELY
07-23-2025, 04:54 AM
Excellent Ars Poetica !!! Will use it in the next Thursdays at Two poetry session in our segment of sharing poems by another author... Enjoyed :)

"Here is my gift, not roses on your grave," - Anna Akhmatova; In Memory Of M. B.*... https://allpoetry.com/In-Memory-Of-M.-B.

*To the Memory of M.B.: Anna Akhmatova penned this poem in memory of Mikhail Bulgakov in March 1940, shortly after Bulgakov’s death.

Danik 2016
07-23-2025, 09:18 AM
Just got a banned notice! :(

Danik 2016
07-23-2025, 09:19 AM
:) :) Intense poem! More about Bulgakov: https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mikhail_Bulgakov. Link didn't work for me, but found the poem at All Poetry.


"I see a candelabra of branches".""This Patch Where the Light Cannot Reach" by Cindy Veach
https://www.versedaily.org/2025/thispatchwherethelight.shtml

tailor STATELY
07-23-2025, 11:34 AM
re: Banned... random, yes.

Bulgakov: Intense writer, and doctor, in turbulent times :)

Wonderful poem with intriguing language... Enjoyed :)

"Just as a little olive offshoot grows" - Jan Kochanowski; Lament V... https://www.poemist.com/jan-kochanowski/lament-v

Danik 2016
07-23-2025, 02:25 PM
Very sad poem! Hope everyone is well?



"Kind Heaven will oft a lesson give".The Swan." by William Hayley
https://www.public-domain-poetry.com/william-hayley/swan-18239

tailor STATELY
07-23-2025, 09:35 PM
Death has visited my church family once more... immediate family doing ok.

Harrowing tale... Enjoyed :)

"Life is a swift, deep river" - Karl Flaster; Life... https://www.lieder.net/lieder/get_text.html?TextId=940977

Danik 2016
07-23-2025, 10:31 PM
So sorry to learn that!


Liked this poem about the brevity of life!

"My language is a Bedouin thief, delighting in foreign sands;"."Wanderlust Ghazal" by Dipika Mukherjee
http://www.versedaily.org/2024/wanderlustghazal.shtml

tailor STATELY
07-24-2025, 04:49 AM
Wonderful language to explore :) Enjoyed.

"Night comes, a Madonna clad in scented blue." - Louise C. Wallace; Night... https://songofamerica.net/song/night-5/

Danik 2016
07-24-2025, 04:56 PM
Enjoyed poem and song. A tenor almost soprano voice.

"Outside town, past the house of the carpenter,"Nocturne" by Melissa Kwasny
http://www.versedaily.org/2024/nocturne_mk.shtml

tailor STATELY
07-24-2025, 06:13 PM
"Pill bottles line my cabinet like little dancers / ready to perform." Unusual poem, but enjoyable :)

"Pink soft hands, yellow rippling wine, " - Lu You; Tender hands... https://www.cn-poetry.com/luyou-poems/tender-hands-poem.html

Danik 2016
07-24-2025, 10:47 PM
Delicate poem,though I usually have the feeling when I read this Chinese poems that they sound much better in Chinese.

A poem by a poet with "Q" in his name

"Man's life is like the morning dew,","Three Poems to my Wife" by Qin Jia
https://www.cn-poetry.com/qinjia-poems/three-poems-to-wife.html

tailor STATELY
07-25-2025, 03:22 AM
Sweet and tender poem (ruined by the English translation most likely)... Enjoyed :)

"Rocky shale, pale voile," - Paul Cameron Brown ; Blue*Eyed Grasses ... https://www.simple-poetry.com/poems/blue-eyed-grasses-13464435706

Danik 2016
07-25-2025, 09:49 AM
Lovely pioneer poem!

"Small motors for taming grass moan the day not so hot, in the Times the columns of the dead are short ones"."Geometry" by Karen Kevorkian
https://www.versedaily.org/2025/geometry.shtml

tailor STATELY
07-25-2025, 04:54 PM
Wonderful images and language... Enjoyed :)

"They're coming! And it seems so long" - Nancy Rebecca Campbell Glass; They're Coming!... https://allpoetry.com/They%27re-Coming!

Danik 2016
07-25-2025, 10:31 PM
The link didn't open, but found the poem in All poetry. Charming poem about the coming of the flowers in spring.

"Underneath an apple-tree"."Apples Growing" by Will Carleton
https://www.poetrycat.com/will-carleton/apples-growing

tailor STATELY
07-26-2025, 01:40 AM
Sorry :( Again, I forgot to check the link (smacks head)... The ! was ignored... corrected.

Darling poem. Enjoyed :)

"Vision of beauty! there floats not a cloud " - Susanna Moodie; The Luminous Bow. ... https://www.poetrycat.com/susanna-moodie/the-luminous-bow

Danik 2016
07-26-2025, 05:38 PM
Aiiiii! Welcome to the club!

Enjoyed this radiant poem!

"When I was a child I used to read"."Palanquin" by Matthew Zapruder
https://www.versedaily.org/2024/palanquin.shtml

tailor STATELY
07-26-2025, 07:00 PM
Enjoyed this personal retrospective :)

Poem by a poet with an 'x' in their name:

"The black dog approaches?" - Jenny Xie; Melancholia... https://poetrysociety.org/poems-essays/in-their-own-words/jenny-xie-on-melancholia

Danik 2016
07-26-2025, 10:49 PM
Wow! A very original approach to poetry. I hope she arrives at a stage where she doesn't feel the need to explain it any more.

Interesting poetry site!

"You sit that plastic-wrapped heart down on my"."A Street to Fall on" by Afrizal Malna
https://poetrysociety.org/poems-essays/visiting-poet/visiting-poet-afrizal-malna

tailor STATELY
07-27-2025, 09:03 AM
"... light up a poem. Scent of / plastic and corpse perfume." Imaginative word play... lost on the context however... Enjoyed :)

Poem by a poet with a 'z' in their name:

"I come from ablaze" - Zoey Yazzie; Ultraviolet Velveteen and Corn—Husked Satin... https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/poems/1651195/the-um-bundling-of-ultraviolet-velveteen-and-corn-husked-satin

Danik 2016
07-27-2025, 11:08 AM
I think the content difficult too, we don't have context clues to these Indonesian poems. But there is an overall view of things floating and falling away that is catching. What I'm gathering from all this contemporary poems we are posting is that every kind of association and image is possible but that the general atmosphere is negative.

Stunning poem by Zoey Yazzie (three "zs" in one name is a feat in itself) as to form and content. All seems to be ablaze and yet holding its place!

"Any swan could put his wings around your neck;"."Myth" by Ekoko Omadeke
https://poetrysociety.org/poems-essays/ars-poetica/ekoko-omadeke

tailor STATELY
07-27-2025, 04:49 PM
Wow, a lot going on... especially liked the last three lines: "Deep within a kitchen cabinet someone hid a box.//When it opened, all the handwritten papers drowned/in soapy dishwater. Only the recipe for cornbread survived." Enjoyed :)

"but my yearning is dark with mirrors—" Scott Ferry; tiny-winged dinosaurs sing sweetly from the trees... https://www.versedaily.org/2025/tinywingeddinosaurssing.shtml

Danik 2016
07-27-2025, 08:03 PM
Did you notice that the poems are getting crazier and crazier? Lewis Carrol must be happy!


"Cats sleep fat and walk thin"."Catalog" by Rosalie Moore
https://www.dennydavis.net/poemfiles/travel/catpoem2.htm poem 18th

tailor STATELY
07-28-2025, 01:53 AM
Lol... a sign of the times.

Enjoyed :) Reminds me a bit of cacian's poems :)

"Desire we past illusions to recall?" - William Wordsworth; Desire We Past Illusions To Recall... https://poetrycatalog.com/desire-we-past-illusions-to-recall-william-wordsworth/

Danik 2016
07-28-2025, 09:29 AM
True-Cacian where are you?

interesting poem and image

Strong wind here. See if I can post the link of the poem.


"Everything dies, I said. How had that started?"."Walking home", poem 31 by Marie Hove
https://www.loc.gov/programs/poetry-and-literature/poet-laureate/poet-laureate-projects/poetry-180/all-poems/item/poetry-180-031/walking-home/

tailor STATELY
07-28-2025, 05:37 PM
Endearing poem... Enjoyed :)

Mid-Winter there... has it been mild? Our Summer has been moderate overall :)

"FAIRY KING." - Juliana Horatia Ewing ; The Blue-Bells On The Lea... https://allpoetry.com/The-Blue-Bells-on-The-Lea

Danik 2016
07-28-2025, 10:41 PM
We are having a regular winter this year.Temperatures in the morning and evening usually about 12-15 grades, in the afternoon 22-27.


Enjoyed this fairy tale poem!

"God gave a Loaf to every Bird —"."God gave a Loaf to every Bird" by Emily Dickinson
https://bloggingdickinson.blogspot.com/2024/10/god-gave-loaf-to-every-bird.html

tailor STATELY
07-29-2025, 07:52 AM
:)

"Hence loathed Melancholy," - John Milton; L'Allegro... https://allpoetry.com/L%27Allegro

Danik 2016
07-29-2025, 10:06 PM
Mythological stories in a nutsheĺl :)!


"I am the surrounded voice"." History on Behalf of My Children” by Gloria Bird
https://poetrysociety.org/poems-essays/poetry-environmental-justice/allison-hedge-coke-1

tailor STATELY
07-30-2025, 08:33 AM
From the author: "As a poet, this poem led me to allow the earth, her people in different forms, to speak truths to power through the poetry of engagement." Enjoyed very much :)

"Just as my watch was done the fog had lifted," - Wilfrid Wilson Gibson; The Lighthouse... https://www.poetrynook.com/poem/lighthouse-4

Danik 2016
07-30-2025, 09:22 AM
impressive narrative poem. Enjoyed very much!


Knock on the door, and you shall have an answer!"."Knock on the door!"
https://allpoetry.com/Knock-On-The-Door

tailor STATELY
07-30-2025, 04:13 PM
I'm thinking introvert... Enjoyed the poem and analysis :)

"Loses his position on worksheet or page in textbook" - Tom Wayman; The Poet... https://www.loc.gov/programs/poetry-and-literature/poet-laureate/poet-laureate-projects/poetry-180/all-poems/item/poetry-180-015/the-poet/

Danik 2016
07-30-2025, 09:11 PM
Lol! This poet image describes a mental retarded . Poor poet!

"My stray paws the door to go out to go in"."Dog Logic" by Aaron Brown
http://www.versedaily.org/2022/doglogic.shtml

tailor STATELY
07-31-2025, 07:06 AM
Hmmm... I was thinking the poet had Alzheimer's.

Lol... neurotic doggie poem... Enjoyed :)

"Now will we plunge into the frigid dark," - Charles Baudelaire ; Autumn Song... https://www.simple-poetry.com/poems/autumn-song-26294817396

Danik 2016
07-31-2025, 10:25 PM
Enjoyed this Autumn Song. Enjoying also the chilly weather and the mild winter sun.


"On the coffin-sized back porch", "Happiness " by Lewis Meyers
http://www.versedaily.org/2024/happiness.shtml

tailor STATELY
08-01-2025, 06:31 AM
A Baudelaire reference... albeit of boredom; an odd tension to this happiness. Enjoyed :)

"Poets make pets of pretty, docile words: " - Elinor Wylie; Pretty Words... https://www.thereader.org.uk/featured-poem-pretty-words-by-elinor-wylie/

Danik 2016
08-01-2025, 03:00 PM
Charming poem and prose text.The idea of sawing words, there is so much to be sawed today. Tried to open the site, but no joy.

Poem by an author with "Q" in his name.

"Ere creation, who could tell"."The Riddle ". by Qu Yian . It's a very long poem but seemed interesting.
https://www.cjvlang.com/Pfloyd/quyuan.html

tailor STATELY
08-01-2025, 08:36 PM
Sorry about the link, must be a regional thing (org.uk) :(

Roger Waters/Pink Floyd were influenced by this poem... Impressive. A question poem throughout... of mythologies and histories intertwined ? Enjoyed :)

"Red blur of cardinal," - Cindy Veach; If I Forgive You... http://www.versedaily.org/2018/ififorgiveyou.shtml

Danik 2016
08-01-2025, 10:44 PM
Never mind!


"Slowed down, stopped. And with a sigh" ."Subway Elegy" by Nan Cohen
http://www.versedaily.org/2022/subwayelegy.shtml

tailor STATELY
08-02-2025, 03:19 AM
Interesting vignette reminding me of my times riding the Bay Area Rapid Transit rails (B.A.R.T.)... Enjoyed :)

"The railroad track is miles away," - Edna St Vincent Millay; Travel... https://www.poetrybyheart.org.uk/poems/travel

Danik 2016
08-02-2025, 10:23 AM
Enjoyed só much this travel poem.

"Under a toadstool crept a wee Elf,". "The Elf and the Doormouse" by Oliver Herford
https://www.poetrybyheart.org.uk/poems/the-elf-and-the-dormouse

tailor STATELY
08-02-2025, 07:34 PM
Lolol :) A delightful tale... Enjoyed :)

"Visionaries seldom find respite" - Cherene Sherrard; The Dictator's Wife, or Mildred Aristide Prepares to Address the Congressional Black Caucus... https://www.versedaily.org/2017/thedictatorswifemildredaristide.shtml

Danik 2016
08-02-2025, 10:51 PM
Can't say that I understand every image but intuitively I agree with this poem.

"Who is this woman in my mirror,"."Mirror" by Barbara Crooker
http://www.versedaily.org/2024/mirror.shtml

tailor STATELY
08-03-2025, 04:27 AM
Ah, yes... mirrors can be so unkind.

Poem by a poet with an 'x' in their name:

"I am a cloud in the sky," - Xu Zhimo; Chance... https://allpoetry.com/poem/8600881-Chance-by-Xu-Zhimo

Danik 2016
08-03-2025, 11:12 AM
Wonderful images! Enjoyed this surgically precise poem


"You who gave your wings for more water,"."Desert Stink Beetle" by David Groff
http://www.versedaily.org/2023/desertstinkbeetle.shtml

tailor STATELY
08-03-2025, 08:09 PM
Ode to a Desert Stink Beetle... Enjoyed :)

Poem by a poet with a 'z' in their name:

"There are all ages and all trades on this bus:" - Xu Zhimo; On the Bus... https://www.chasingthemodern.com/poetry

Danik 2016
08-03-2025, 09:44 PM
Enjoyed so much this poem! The setting ist modern, but the delicacy of the images remains the same of th3 classical Chinese poets.

"At her Junior High School graduation,"."Song" by Eamon Grennam
https://allpoetry.com/poem/14371783-Song-by-Eamon-Grennan

tailor STATELY
08-03-2025, 10:32 PM
Enjoyed this retrospective vignette... :)

"Below the down the stranded town" - John Davidson; A Cinque Port... https://allpoetry.com/A-Cinque-Port

Danik 2016
08-04-2025, 08:27 AM
Elegant verses describing deep changes in a port town. Enjoyed!

"Clasp your arms round her neck to-night,"."Little Nell" by Marietta Holley
https://allpoetry.com/poem/8544823-Little-Nell-by-Marietta-Holley

tailor STATELY
08-04-2025, 06:32 PM
Such a tender poem done with ambiguity so to better the tension. The analysis and other readers' thoughtful comments are enlightening but none concrete... Enjoyed :)

"Don't lock me in wedlock, I want" - Denise Levertov; About Marriage... https://allpoetry.com/poem/15757250-About-Marriage-by-Denise-Levertov

Danik 2016
08-04-2025, 10:33 PM
Little Nell. Found these possible references: https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nell_Trent and much younger https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ellen_Organ


These beautiful poem got me first interested in the poetry of Denise Levertov.

"Every year the swallows come"."Swallows" by A. E. Stallings
http://www.versedaily.org/2021/swallows.shtml

tailor STATELY
08-05-2025, 08:01 AM
Enjoyed the wikis of the beloved Little Nell :)

Busy, busy Swallows returning every year... Incredible poem... Enjoyed :)

"Flute flourish not without agony between cadaverous branches, broken the young hear voices." - Vibrant Oddities; Red Reaper Swallow Bending Earth Mother... https://allpoetry.com/poem/16054098-Red-Reaper-Swallow-Bending-Earth-Mother-by-Vibrant-Oddities

Danik 2016
08-05-2025, 09:33 AM
Lol!Very modern in structure and content! Vibrant Oddities surpassing herself! Enjoyed rhythm and alterations.


Quandry, By: Bimal Arial

https://poetrycatalog.com/quandry-bimal-aryal/

tailor STATELY
08-05-2025, 07:02 PM
"She breaks the shackles of morality;" seems out of place unless there was a law given not to pass... perhaps: "She breaks the shackles of" mortality... Enjoyed :)

"Heaven" has different Signs—to me—" - Emily Dickinson; Heaven has different Signs—to me... https://allpoetry.com/Heaven-has-different-Signsto-me

Danik 2016
08-05-2025, 09:59 PM
Yes,it certainly makes more sense.Unless the law doesn't allow anyone to fly over the gate. But maybe Bimal isn't native in English.

A typical ED poem, but not a difficult one. Enjoyed!

"I have often wondered of a life without cheese."."I Love You, Although You Smell Like Feet", By: Calliope Irving
https://poetrycatalog.com/i-love-you-although-you-smell-like-feet-calliope-irving/

tailor STATELY
08-06-2025, 04:24 AM
Lol... Love it ! :)

"Jazz man was full of rhythm in orange and red" - PinkFaerie5; Jazz Man's Blues... https://allpoetry.com/poem/17498434-Jazz-Man-s-Blues--by-PinkFaerie5

Danik 2016
08-06-2025, 10:05 PM
Enjoyed this jazzy poem!


"KING CANUTE was weary hearted; he had reigned for years a score,"."King Canute" by William Thackeray
https://www.poemine.com/William-Makepeace-Thackeray/King-Canute.html

tailor STATELY
08-07-2025, 05:27 AM
"lampreys served to dinner"... yeuch! "King Canute is dead and gone: Parasites exist alway."... Enjoyed :)

"Lo, how they weave - the imperturbable three -" - Adelaide Crapsey; The Event... https://www.poemine.com/Adelaide-Crapsey/The-Event.html

Danik 2016
08-07-2025, 08:49 AM
interesting thou despondent poem. About the 3 Parcas which weave the destiny's of humans. Enjoyed! To me the poem transmits the poet's feeling of acceptance and resignation.

"My lost tadpole returned in a hopping ball of dust."."Pond Glimmer" by Rebekah Remington
http://www.versedaily.org/2024/pondglimmer.shtml

tailor STATELY
08-07-2025, 11:40 AM
I love the word 'glimmer', it has a special meaning for me :) Enjoyed this poem very much :)

"nothing exists time" - MCW; senryu 25/6/13a... https://allpoetry.com/poem/18477346-senryu-25-6-13a-by-MCW

Danik 2016
08-07-2025, 10:28 PM
Not sure I agree, but it is a different way of looking at some things. Enjoyed!


"Oh, Pamela, I've not forgotten how"."Utopias Demise" by Carol Lynn Stevenson Grellas
http://www.versedaily.org/2023/utopiasdemise.shtml

tailor STATELY
08-08-2025, 07:22 AM
I agree.

A privileged utopian life as children lost after leaving the nest, I guess.

"Privilege hides in plain sight" - Poetry Accident; Pedigree... https://allpoetry.com/poem/17482275-Pedigree-by-Poetry-Accident

Danik 2016
08-08-2025, 09:29 AM
Rhimes sometimes a bit forced, but poem ok.


Poem by a poet with "Q" in his name

"The bowers lost in mist,".""Treading on Grass - At an Inn of Chenzhou
- Poetry of Qin Guan
https://www.cn-poetry.com/qinguan-poems/inn-of-chenzhou.html

tailor STATELY
08-08-2025, 03:18 PM
Touching, wistful, nostalgic poem in English... I would think more so in the native language... wondrous... Enjoyed :)

"Rose from a repeat of pain" - OpenLeapling ; Seen by Who ... https://allpoetry.com/poem/17652444-Seen-by-Who-by-OpenLeapling

Danik 2016
08-08-2025, 10:04 PM
Poem about one's place in the world. Some reiterative verses that remind of the structure of the villanelle.


"Sometimes we give them a hard time, the martyrs."."Martyrs" by Claudine Toutoungi
https://www.versedaily.org/2024/martyrs.shtml

tailor STATELY
08-09-2025, 06:09 AM
A bit lost in this poem, though I enjoyed the music and dance references :)

"There’s something about the saxophone," - Yumpy; Golden Whispers (A reflection and POV poem)... https://allpoetry.com/poem/18552560-Golden-Whispers--A-reflection-and-POV-poem---by-Yumpy

Danik 2016
08-09-2025, 05:17 PM
A bit generally lost myself, discovered Word has wanished from my tablet just when I need it badly (free).

Enjoyed this poem about music very much! A discovery!

"Umbrageous cedars murmuring symphonies"."Hamlet" by Walter de Lá Mare
https://www.public-domain-poetry.com/walter-de-la-mare/hamlet-33532

tailor STATELY
08-09-2025, 06:06 PM
Word: oh, no!... Libre Office, Open Office, Google Docs... all free are what I use.

Love Walter De La Mare's poetry... this is a side I hadn't seen of him yet: wonderful images and language... Enjoyed :)

“Vanity loves to read my poetry” - Tangible Joy; Vainglorious... https://allpoetry.com/poem/13474081-Vainglorious-by-Tangible-Joy




“Vanity loves to read my poetry”

Danik 2016
08-09-2025, 10:26 PM
oh no. not banned again

Danik 2016
08-09-2025, 10:28 PM
Free in terms. They all want your data.

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"Wearing deep-cleated snow shoes,"."Conjuration" by Laura Foley
https://www.versedaily.org/2025/conjuration.shtml

tailor STATELY
08-10-2025, 02:48 AM
A delightful poem :) Enjoyed!

Poem by a poet with an 'x' in their name:

"In spring the river rises to meet the sea,"- Zhang Ruoxo; Spring River Flower Moon a Moonlit Night... https://100tangpoems.wordpress.com/2024/02/15/zhang-ruoxo/

Danik 2016
08-10-2025, 02:57 PM
Wonderful poem, tailor and careful translator.The Chinese lyricism. is unsurpassed. There seem to be very few poems of this author or you could use him for "z" too.


"You will journey many a weary day and long,"."Song of the Swallow" by Marietta Holley
https://allpoetry.com/Summer-Song-Of-The-Swallow

tailor STATELY
08-10-2025, 07:23 PM
:)

Breathtaking poem... so well crafted. Enjoyed :)

Poem by a poet with a 'z' in their name:

"A flowering orchid in spring, " - Zhang Jiuling; ORCHID AND ORANGE I ... https://100tangpoems.wordpress.com/2017/01/13/orchid-and-orange/

Oh... I may miss a turn, I'll be incommunicado for a bit.

Danik 2016
08-11-2025, 10:24 AM
No worries! Hope all is well with you!

Loved that poem and the lovelyy ilustrations.

"A din Akkadian seeps in my room,"The Last Poet of Sumer,"
May 3, 2024 by Eric Chevlen
https://poetrycatalog.com/the-last-poet-of-sumer-eric-chevlen/

tailor STATELY
08-11-2025, 11:20 AM
Interesting perspective... a poem pressed in clay from the days of Sumer... Enjoyed :)

"Barque of phosphor" - Wallace Stevens; Fabliau Of Florida... https://allpoetry.com/Fabliau-Of-Florida

Danik 2016
08-11-2025, 01:55 PM
:)

Magical images! Enjoyed so much!

"Come, gentle sleep, with the holy night,". "Sleep" by Marietta Holley
https://allpoetry.com/poem/8544793-Sleep-by-Marietta-Holley

(Trying to answer during the day as banning algorithm usually prowls late at night in search of victims).

tailor STATELY
08-11-2025, 05:23 PM
It's a pesky beast for sure, lol... :)

A powerful poem about sleep and the hoped for influences... Enjoyed :)

"Drum on your drums, batter on your banjoes," - Carl Sandburg; Jazz Fantasia... https://allpoetry.com/Jazz-Fantasia

Danik 2016
08-11-2025, 10:38 PM
Enjoyed this musical poem!


"EARLY in the morning I hear on your piano"."EARLY in the morning I hear on your piano" by Robert Louis Stevenson
https://allpoetry.com/Early-In-The-Morning-I-Hear-On-Your-Piano

tailor STATELY
08-12-2025, 04:38 AM
Delightful little poem... :)

"Faeries, faeries, in the night," - Mr.Whimsy; Faeries, Faeries... https://allpoetry.com/poem/14487705--i-class--fa-fa-thumb-tack--title--Pinned-to-profile----i--nbsp-F-by-Mr.Whimsy/

Danik 2016
08-12-2025, 04:03 PM
Charming poem!

"Giving up three for one!" - mother,". "Three For Three.
By Pamela S. Vining, (J. C. Yule)

https://www.public-domain-poetry.com/pamela-s-vining/three-for-three-34467

tailor STATELY
08-12-2025, 05:30 PM
Heartfelt poem of sacrifice and a longing separation and love... Enjoyed :)

"had a poem" - Danimal; where's the paper... https://allpoetry.com/poem/18238018-wheres-the-paper-by-Danimal (I can relate)

Danik 2016
08-12-2025, 10:39 PM
Interesting poetica.


"In his arm-chair, warmly cushioned,"."Harry the First" by Marrieta Holley
https://allpoetry.com/Harry-The-First

tailor STATELY
08-13-2025, 02:30 AM
Family pride and love... most enjoyable :)

"Jelly Roll Morton upon his black keys whisper jazz dreams, musicians reveal dancing pumpkins." - Vibrant Oddities ; Marvelous Mr. Toshi In Jazz Dreamland... https://allpoetry.com/poem/16797480-Marvelous-Mr.-Toshi-In-Jazz-Dreamland--by-Vibrant-Oddities/

Danik 2016
08-13-2025, 08:57 PM
Enjoyed that jazzy fantasy, its images, its rhythm and its alliterations.

"Kookoorookoo! Kookoorookoo!"."Kookoorookoo! Kookoorookoo!" by Cristina Rossetti
https://www.poemine.com/Christina-Rossetti/Kookoorookoo-Kookoorookoo.html
(All poetry's link didn't work)

tailor STATELY
08-14-2025, 02:34 AM
A great way to start the day (minus the crowing rooster) Enjoyed :)

"Looking back" - Leith Rutan; Leopard Eyes... https://allpoetry.com/poem/17755857-Leopard-Eyes-by-Leith-Rutan

Danik 2016
08-14-2025, 09:54 AM
Very synthetic as a good poem should be!

"My therapist" Love Letter" by Connie Post
https://www.versedaily.org/2025/loveletter.shtml

tailor STATELY
08-14-2025, 12:12 PM
Wow. :)

"narwhal ivory" - Jim baruffi; [ narwhal ivory ]... https://allpoetry.com/poem/15922571---narwhal-ivory----by-jim-baruffi

Danik 2016
08-14-2025, 10:41 PM
A bit cryptic

"Others will picture him on the bench," "Coda" by David Starkey
http://www.versedaily.org/2023/coda.shtml

tailor STATELY
08-15-2025, 04:21 AM
Agree

Couldn't ID who A.G. was, but it is quite an homage poem... Enjoyed :)

"poets are now ubiquitous" - Nooshin azadi; [ poets are now ubiquitous ]... https://allpoetry.com/poem/18588705---poets-are-now-ubiquitous---by-nooshin-azadi

Danik 2016
08-15-2025, 01:01 PM
Probably the author doesn't want him identified, unless by people who knew him during his life.

ironic poem!


Poem by a poet with "Q" in his name
"Beneath the Yu Gu Terrace flow the clear"."Written on the Cliff at Zaokou in Jiangxi Province)" by Xin-Qiji
https://www.classicchinesepoetry.com/tag/xin-qiji/

tailor STATELY
08-15-2025, 03:12 PM
Ironic that later 'poets' changed the second couplet; "tweaked" to tweak contemporary authorities... still I enjoyed :)

"Rain, rain, sweet warm rain," - Sydney Thompson Dobell; A Shower In War-Time... https://www.poemine.com/Sydney-Thompson-Dobell/A-Shower-In-War-Time.html

Danik 2016
08-15-2025, 10:54 PM
Xin-Qiji must be very popular in China for they taking that kind of liberty with his poems.

Curious poem. It starts as a poem about a rainshower at the time rain wasn't so destructive as today and one liked to watch it.Then it changes direction several times so that it seems various poems in one.

"She sang beyond the genius of the sea."."The Idea of Order at Key West" by Wallace Stevens
https://allpoetry.com/The-Idea-of-Order-at-Key-West

tailor STATELY
08-16-2025, 03:43 AM
Complex poem. I liked the AI's take on the poem, but felt there was something more and just a moment of research found: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Idea_of_Order_at_Key_West Turns out it's a very important poem in the American canon... Enjoyed :)

"The grass is spreading out across the plain," - Bai Juyi; Grass... https://allpoetry.com/poem/8557409-Grass-by-Bai-JuYi

Danik 2016
08-16-2025, 09:31 AM
Thanks for the link, tailor! Didn't know this poem was so important! :) There are discrepancies: the title seems not to fit a poem about a singing woman!


"Under mossy oak and pine"."Creole Serenade" by Madison Julius Cawetn
https://www.public-domain-poetry.com/madison-julius-cawein/creole-serenade-11323

tailor STATELY
08-16-2025, 06:54 PM
Beautiful abab cdcd... ijij poem. Enjoyed :)

"Vacuous hole swallows me into my own mind, as I reflect on every little thing" -
Di Gioia; Void... https://allpoetry.com/poem/17161308-Void--by-Di-Gioia

Danik 2016
08-16-2025, 10:53 PM
A !00 tons poem!

"Waving in our doorway, a tiny Tom Brady"."Halloween Parade, Children's Hospital Boston" by Scott Frey
https://www.versedaily.org/2025/halloweenparadechildrenshospitalboston.shtml

tailor STATELY
08-17-2025, 11:20 AM
:)

A sad and (Je ne sais quoi)/surreal? poem. "Make no mistake: our kids are hiding / from Death, who long has prowled these halls." Interesting, albeit strange, images. Enjoyed :)

Poem by a poet with an 'x' in her name:

"If you want to pick flowers, you have to hike." - Ho Xuan Huong; Picking Flowers... https://allpoetry.com/Picking-Flowers

Danik 2016
08-17-2025, 05:45 PM
I don't see it as surreal, tailor. I understood they are children with severe illnesses"in this wing for injured brains and struggling lungs" who are dressed up for a Halloween Parade as a way of bringing a bit of fun to them.I think, there is a combination of the mock horror of the parade and the real horror of the illnesses.We have that in some hospitals of Brazil.


"Ye holy Towers that shade the wave-worn steep,"."Bamborough Castle
By William Lisle Bowles
https://www.public-domain-poetry.com/william-lisle-bowles/bamborough-castle-9297

tailor STATELY
08-17-2025, 08:15 PM
Ah.

Nice sonnet. https://www.bamburghcastle.com/ :)


Poem by a poet with a 'z' in his name:

"Wind and rain escorted Spring's departure," - Mao Zedong; Ode to the Plum Blossom... https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-35441

Danik 2016
08-17-2025, 10:37 PM
Lol! Didn’t think that the castle still existed and could be visited.

Nice poem by Mao.


"As I lie at rest on a patch of clover"."Black Swans"
A poem by Andrew Barton Paterson
https://allpoetry.com/Black-Swans

tailor STATELY
08-18-2025, 02:09 AM
Nostalgic poem woven with black swans and their flight... Enjoyed :)

"Beyond the sea, beyond the sea," - Thomas Love Peacock; Beyond the Sea... https://allpoetry.com/Beyond-the-Sea

Danik 2016
08-18-2025, 09:02 AM
Lovely nostalgic poem!

"Calico pie," "Calico Pie" by Edward Lear
https://www.public-domain-poetry.com/edward-lear/calico-pie-23368

tailor STATELY
08-18-2025, 03:40 PM
Cute poem :)

"Doors barred tight against stronger gusts" - Robyn selters; As the Flame Flickers... https://allpoetry.com/poem/18290218-As-the-Flame-Flickers-by-robyn-selters

Danik 2016
08-18-2025, 04:34 PM
Enjoyed this poem, specially the first verse!

"Eagle-heart, child-heart, bonnie lad o' dreams,"Love And Art.
By Charles Hamilton Musgrove
https://www.public-domain-poetry.com/charles-hamilton-musgrove/love-and-art-27830

tailor STATELY
08-18-2025, 06:09 PM
Appears to be a choice between the vocation/avocation of art as a lover and a maiden... Enjoyed :)

"From the depths of fertile soil," - MyAngels3; Brave Enough To Sing... https://allpoetry.com/poem/17560274-Brave-Enough-To-Sing-by-MyAngels3

Danik 2016
08-18-2025, 10:30 PM
What I mostly enjoyed is the interesting illustration of the poem.


"Gayly a knight set forth against the foe,"."Gloria theTrue" by Marietta Holley
https://allpoetry.com/Gloria-The-True

tailor STATELY
08-19-2025, 02:22 AM
Enjoyed... a true knight receiving his reward :)

"Heart, not so heavy as mine" - Emily Dickinson; Heart, not so heavy as mine... https://allpoetry.com/Heart,-not-so-heavy-as-mine

Danik 2016
08-19-2025, 10:02 PM
Unusually lighthearted poem by ED. Enjoyed!

"It's no small grace"."Grace" by Donna Hilbert
https://www.versedaily.org/2025/grace.shtml

tailor STATELY
08-20-2025, 06:04 AM
... "before the day goes wrong." Not very optimistic... Enjoyed :)

"Jazz funeral in New Orleans," - Justa-Geezer; Final exit from New Orleans... https://allpoetry.com/poem/18324641-Final-exit-from-New-Orleans.-by-Justa-Geezer

Danik 2016
08-20-2025, 08:31 AM
Enjoyed! Reminds me of the funerals here of Carnival and Samba celebrities, where friends and family play the favorite songs at the funeral.


"Kindness soothes the bitter anguish,"."Kindness" by Eliza Gurney
https://www.public-domain-poetry.com/eliza-paul-kirkbride-gurney/kindness-17072

tailor STATELY
08-20-2025, 12:15 PM
Sweet poem, we need more kindness and gratefulness... Enjoyed :)

"Lost so long ago" - Florida Sunshine; Lost... https://allpoetry.com/poem/2788526-Lost-by-Florida-Sunshine

Danik 2016
08-20-2025, 10:11 PM
It's not so my cup of tea but ok.

"My father came to this country"."Not my Country" by Andrew Payton
http://www.versedaily.org/2024/notmycountry.shtml

tailor STATELY
08-21-2025, 02:37 AM
A shipwreck... landing in a Mexican province (Michoacán), 7-generations... feeling like aliens to the country... Enjoyed :)

"No beauty exists," - Shahaf Yefet ; Yes... https://allpoetry.com/poem/17636245-Yes-by-Shahaf-Yefet

Danik 2016
08-21-2025, 09:15 AM
Simple, touching verses. Was a bit confused here about the meaning :"A friend will let know,
when you’re in need of help."

"Once through an autumn wood"."Confort" by Marietta Holley
https://allpoetry.com/poem/8544871-Comfort-by-Marietta-Holley

tailor STATELY
08-21-2025, 12:14 PM
I read the poem as 4-couplets where the 2nd is a metaphor for the first and the 4th a metaphor for the 3rd.

The AI must have a faith filter... I see adversity and trials that ultimately bring us closer to our Savior; or maybe I'm just wired that way. Enjoyed :)

"preloved journals of literature set in place" - Twistoftroy: The Bookcase... https://allpoetry.com/poem/18436166-The-Bookcase--by-Twistoftroy

Danik 2016
08-21-2025, 10:23 PM
Yes! :)

Enjoyed the poem plus the charming illustration!

Poem by an author with two "Qs" in his name:
"You were foreordained to find the source."."Farewell to a Japanese Buddhist Priest Bound Homeward
- Poetry of Qian Qi
https://www.cn-poetry.com/qianqi-poetry/farewell-japanese-buddhist-priest.html

tailor STATELY
08-22-2025, 03:14 AM
2-Q's! Wonderful tapestry/hanging/artwork... "The water and the moon are as calm as your faith"... Enjoyed :)

"Row a boat alone in the river," - Pu Songling; The song of plucking the lotus flower... https://www.cn-poetry.com/pusongling-poems/plucking-lotus-flower.html

Danik 2016
08-22-2025, 09:55 AM
Beautiful picture a d a charming poem, but the translation is not so good. Enjoyed though!


"She sat in the cottage door, and the fair June moon looked down". "Roses of June" by Marietta Holley.
https://allpoetry.com/Roses-Of-June

tailor STATELY
08-22-2025, 03:49 PM
Sorrowful poem; the AI analysis does it justice... Enjoyed :)

"the indomitable snow woman cannot be tamed" - Adnama17; the indomitable snow woman... https://allpoetry.com/poem/17886338-the-indomitable-snow-woman-by-Adnama17

Danik 2016
08-22-2025, 10:28 PM
Enjoyed this indomitable snow feminism!


"Underneath a sycamore tree I am sitting on a bench"."It’s the Real Thing" by Christine Gosnay
http://www.versedaily.org/2017/itstherealthing.shtml