this is a poem dedicated you see reasons in everything!

[mdew_47]

There is a reason

There is a reason,
a reason behind everything.
There is a reason,
for your coming to this world,
a reason for your falling in love,
a reason behind the people,
people of your past not making to your future!

There is a reason,
a reason behind everything.
Reason behind your failure,
behind your success.
a reason behind the pain,
and behind the relief.

There is a reason that you must feel!
There is a reason that you must think!

[Pendragon]

Structurally sound, well laid out, and good idea. Even well written. There is only one thing wrong with it: the word “reason” repeats ad nauseam . You really should try a thesaurus, to find other words or expressions to say the same thing to break up monotony.

[mdew_47]

thank you pen

[mdew_47]

any one who go through my poem is welcome to post their quotes here, whether it is good or bad!

[AuntShecky]

You asked for my suggestions and here is one. Try to insert some images or sounds which would make your piece breath a little and make it come alive.