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CdnReader
10-01-2007, 03:33 AM
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Union

I celebrate the night in your eyes
that brings depth to your love
and the breathlessness
that expands beyond measure.

Shall I give you my hand?
That we may walk on the sliver of the moon,
slipping beyond the back of the sun
and our dance shall be eclipsed
only by the breadth of the universe itself.

Lift me over the heavens
and share with me
your sweet spirit....
that which brings forth the reality,
and leaves behind the nothingness
that was us
before.....

Will you join with me in the fullness
of the earth's beauty?

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gothic
10-01-2007, 07:38 AM
cdn,I didn't know which lines to pick as my favourite,cause the whole poem was so OUSTANDING!!! each line would make one shiver...this one is a unique piece of work of yours,I must say.

symphony
10-01-2007, 07:49 AM
love can be presented in THIS way?
i MUST fall in love then!

erm... nice one, Cdn.

CdnReader
10-01-2007, 07:50 AM
Thanks very much, Gothic and Symphony. Much appreciated. (Symphony.... pssst!.... yes, you must!) :)

symphony
10-01-2007, 07:55 AM
may be my problem doesnt lie in not loving, but in loving too many things! :p "things" including my tree-window and dead people like Tagore and Einstein...

CdnReader
10-01-2007, 07:58 AM
That doesn't sound like any kind of problem to me, Symph. Love knows no boundaries, ya know.... ;)