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Granny5
09-28-2007, 11:23 AM
Can you hear my heart
It’s screaming
Don’t you hear it
Crying out
Asking for peace
Begging
Don’t you feel it?
Locked down
Shut out
Silenced
Wanting to explode
To tell you of the pain
The sorrow it feels
For you, for me
For all of us
Dreaming
Of how it should be
Of how it could be
Trapped
Unable to escape
Guilty
For wanting to

AuntShecky
09-28-2007, 11:35 AM
Bravo! This is the kind of "urgency" I look for in poems.

Granny5
09-28-2007, 11:37 AM
Thank you Auntie. Now, you're after MY heart. I do appreciate your kindness.

Lote-Tree
09-28-2007, 12:03 PM
Can you hear my heart
It’s screaming
Don’t you hear it
Crying out
Asking for peace
Begging
Don’t you feel it?
Locked down
Shut out
Silenced
Wanting to explode
To tell you of the pain
The sorrow it feels
For you, for me
For all of us
Dreaming
Of how it should be
Of how it could be
Trapped
Unable to escape
Guilty
For wanting to




Bueno! I liked it :D