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Bartholomew
09-24-2007, 10:00 AM
Some messing around with rhyming sapphic stanzas.

Laureates
Edward Alan Bartholomew

Were we split or shaken by qualms and quarrels,
Quaked from boughs in bushels no longer cherished;
Were we rocked from resting upon our laurels,
Laureates perished,

Sense would part from substance, go unattended,
Try to sense itself, but not sensing ever;
Substance lacking sense would be left unmended,
Parted forever:

Blue apart from sky, for the air was looted;
Red not rock nor flame nor a beating bloodline;
Grassless green, the sod and the seed uprooted;
Light without sunshine;

Heat without the sun's heavy tide of summer;
Sweet without a tongue nor a licking lapping;
Beat without the blow of the drum, nor drummer
Steadily clapping.

Could you bear to tear our ownselves asunder?
Rather, let us bend at the laurel lightly,
Quiver little to strain not the bough whereunder
Fasten us tightly.

Pendragon
09-24-2007, 02:35 PM
Oh, wow! Great! Never seen one that rhymed so perfectly before and still was so original. Much better than any Sapphic I have ever attempted. Welcome to the Gathering of Poets, but here, there can be many more than one...

Pen

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