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formality hater
09-21-2007, 01:55 PM
"Tale of a Motorbike-rider"

His bright red helmet,
White striped suit,
And hair tied behind in ponytail,
He winked,he smiled,
At the screaming crowd,
Cheering and jeering in his wake.

A loud gun-shot,and he was off,
His motorbike speeding on the track,
Triumphant eyes and held-up head,
He waited to turn the records down,
He had to race for the First place,
Black and White checkpost,he could not wait!

Oh,the venom he felt for the depraved tree,
Which dared to step in his way,
He had forgotten the Newton's Law,
So all he did was accelerate,
With a tremendous force,but constant mass,
He crashed and watched the sparrows dance.

Wrapped up in sheets,
He shrieked from pain,
Enraged at all his chanting fans,
Who cheered and almost wrecked his day,
"No hurdle,no barrier can thurst you down,
While your opponents are afraid of stupid trees!"


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I was getting tired of the-all-too-gloomy verses,so I have adopted a new line.What do you think?Feel free to tell.;)

AuntShecky
09-25-2007, 10:14 AM
I liked this one! It's very immediate and it has a witty punchline. I'm going to look for more pieces from "Formality Hater."

Pendragon
09-25-2007, 10:23 AM
Yes! Down with doom and gloom and the perfect touch of irony! I was thinking of all the crazy things we used to do as kids that now are known as "extreme sports." Back then it was called by our loving mothers "Risking your fool neck!"

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