Adventure

[Libra Swords]

As I start to read
my imagination leaves
on a journey unknown,
a journey untold,

As I sail out into the sea,
with blankets and tea,
I see how amazing this
journey may be.

I sail far and wide,
bumpy at first, then
here I arrive.

This island I flee,
not knowing what danger
may be,
Oh, can it be?
There's a house near by.

No one lives here,
I guess I shall stay,
for my adventure awaits,
for me, today!

[Libra Swords]

Has anyone read this poem??

[Miranda]

I think it's a light hearted poem and a 'fun' one. I think you are getting a bit obsessed with making things rhyme which is okay when it kind of happens in a natural way, but when the words are chosen because they rhyme somehow it doesn't work for me. But I really like the second verse... 'As I sail out into the sea,
with blankets and tea,
I see how amazing this
journey may be.'

its an unusual way to speak of reading in bed and I think its great! I also like the concept of reading a book as a journey being embarked upon. I think maybe you could improve on it, it carries some good ideas.

[Libra Swords]

Hey.....thanks! I love this poem! Adventure here I come!!