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Pendragon
09-17-2007, 09:29 AM
Desecration

The pure, white stone of the temple
belied its age,
for it held within the polished marble halls
the wisdom of the Ancients.
The young man whose duty it was
to guard the tabernacle of the deity
Grey Matter,
performed his task with a learning
far beyond his years,
seeing to it that only the most desirable sacrifices
were burned on the Altar of Knowledge,
to send up a sweet-smelling incense
to the demi-god’s throne.
Then one fateful day a shining daemon appeared,
sweeping down dragon-like upon the hallowed halls,
spreading flame and destruction that scarred forever
the bleached stone of the temple.
It toppled the image of the god Grey Matter,
smashing it into ruin.
And, in one final blow,
It sacrificed the caretaker upon the altar.
Ripping his heart from his breast,
it wrote in blood its own name upon the white wall:
MADNESS—

Dale Harris
© 11/24/95

motherhubbard
09-17-2007, 09:51 AM
I think you are saying more that you say - no accidental words there
I would love to hear you read this out loud

barbara0207
09-17-2007, 04:59 PM
What a wonderful image to think of! It sent shivers down my spine although I may not quite be of your opinion. (I sacrifice on the altar of Grey Matter myself. ;) ) But then again I may have read the ending in a different way than you intended; it is certainly open to interpretation.

But it's a great poem that gives you something to think about. I love that.

Pendragon
09-18-2007, 09:25 AM
I think you are saying more that you say - no accidental words there
I would love to hear you read this out loudAnd you would be quite correct. The copyright date itself tells a story...