View Full Version : Of Pennies and Half-Pennies
NikolaiI
09-16-2007, 02:09 PM
Yesterday
A penny moment came to me,
And it asked me who I am.
I told him, "I'm a half-penny,
And you may call me Sam."
A penny dream came passing by,
He took me for a cent.
I told him, "I'm a half-penny,"
And he knew what I meant.
A penny thought accused me bad,
He said I killed a man.
Now you'll see a very sad
Half-penny Sam.
NikolaiI
09-16-2007, 02:11 PM
Okay, if you can guess the theme of this, I'll draw you a picture- and just so you know, I can't draw. But it's a secret theme, but if you can guess it yeah. Actually there are two themes, but one is personal and impossible for you to figure out, but the other you might. Make that three themes, but the third is obscure and doesn't matter. Or probably it's such a perfect poem there are infinite themes, but if you can guess the one I have in mind, I'll draw you a picture. Yes, because I thought of another theme that came before the third...
Haha, I'm crazy, but if you could follow my thought processes you'd be very happy.
Pendragon
09-17-2007, 09:38 AM
Well, I cannot read your mind, but I know what I like in poetry, and this is a fine, simple poem. Well done! http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/Appaluse.gif
motherhubbard
09-17-2007, 09:57 AM
well, I'm with Pen on this. Can you give another hint?
NikolaiI
09-17-2007, 10:20 AM
I can't think of it now! Sorry. :(
Bakiryu
09-17-2007, 03:35 PM
Penny!
Bakiryu
09-17-2007, 03:35 PM
I like the way it sounds.
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