Silver

[TheFifthElement]

A silver knob
on a silver door,
a silver door
in a silver frame,
a silver frame
in a silver wall,
a silver wall
in a silver house,
a silver house
in a silver field,
a silver field
in a silver land,
a silver land
on a silver sea,
a silver sea
on a silver world,
a silver world
in a silver galaxy,
a silver galaxy
in a silver universe,
a silver universe
in a silver dream,
a silver dream
in a silver dreamer.

The dreamer sleeps in silver.

[Poppy]

A silver knob
on a silver door,
a silver door
in a silver frame,
a silver frame
in a silver wall,
a silver wall
in a silver house,
a silver house
in a silver field,
a silver field
in a silver land,
a silver land
on a silver sea,
a silver sea
on a silver world,
a silver world
in a silver galaxy,
a silver galaxy
in a silver universe,
a silver universe
in a silver dream,
a silver dream
in a silver dreamer.

The dreamer sleeps in silver.

This is great 5th. I like it when poet's take chances. This to me flowed wonderfully and I wish I could hear it to music.
~Poppy

[symphony]

Golden wine
in a golden chalice
upon a golden table
on the golden floor
of a golden room
in a golden house
with a golden garden
full of golden apples
of The Golden Eden...

Okie this is fun :p

[white camellia]

The color of this world
in my dog's eyes
is grey-
I wonder
does that make her
happier?

I enjoyed your beautiful poem here, TheFifthElement. This reminded me of a series of books of fairy tales. Each one book is named by a color. This also reminded me of people's scientific dream about having the Moon.

[Pendragon]

Those shining pylons stand this one in silver... Good job, Fifth! Here's a pricecess to go with this silver tower...

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/Princess.gif

[TheFifthElement]

Thank you Poppy, I admit, I was a bit nervous about this one.

Symphony & white camillia - I loved your poems!

Pen, thank you for the princess. :)

[Bakiryu]

Wow, I love this poem. Am I biased because I love silver? Who cares?! This poem is beautiful :)

[stormy sky]

it's sprinkled with moondust,it shines and shimmers in silver.
pretty!