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Granny5
09-12-2007, 03:45 PM
Just so you'll have something to read before going to sleep. :yawnb:

The Other Night

I awake and wonder
Has sleep taken you yet
Are you in mist of dreams
Holding them as long as possible
I want hear your voice
Telling me everything is alright
You need to rest
So I wait till dawn
Touching you
kisses on your chin
trying to stir you awake.
“One more hour, let me sleep”,
You mumble.



Apart

Sweet kisses and warm hugs
and you are gone for what time
it takes to do what duty requires
Tell the governor that you must
remain with me a while longer.
One more kiss, just one more
because then I will be alone.
No matter who else is with me,
without you, I am always alone.
Except for the part of you I keep
in my heart and in my soul.
A part that remains no matter
how far you are from me.


Remote

Where will you be
without your remote
to change your channels
wherever you go
whatever you do



Tonight

It’ll be a long night
Wondering
Are you sleeping
Are you ok
Are you missing me
It’ll be a long night
Tossing and turning
Getting your pillow
Just like your shoulder
Laying on your side
It’ll be a long night
Alone in our bed
No one to rub my head
No noise to let me know
That you’re here too.

Dan

This life that you’ve given me
without selfishness and
with great thought
is what I waited for
I give you
my soul within yours
safe from all that would harm me.
My heart within yours
shielded from all danger
by your strong love
my love for you to hold forever
And after I go I will watch over you
till you arrive
I will be waiting to see
you smile when you see me
That special smile you have
for only me.

motherhubbard
09-12-2007, 03:54 PM
wow! I've been gone for an hour and you've been working

CdnReader
09-12-2007, 04:43 PM
These are all so beautiful, Granny, but this one.....



Dan

This life that you’ve given me
without selfishness and
with great thought
is what I waited for
I give you
my soul within yours
safe from all that would harm me.
My heart within yours
shielded from all danger
by your strong love
my love for you to hold forever
And after I go I will watch over you
till you arrive
I will be waiting to see
you smile when you see me
That special smile you have
for only me.

This one made my heart cry for how much love is in these few words. :bawling: Magnificent. A keeper.

Granny5
09-12-2007, 04:46 PM
thank you, Cdn. I do appreciate your kindness.

Poppy
09-12-2007, 05:02 PM
Gosh...and I was going to impress you with a phone call. Thank you my darling. I hope everyone can see one of the reasons why I love you so!
I am a bit giddy now after reading these. But, I can't imagine you letting me
leave without my special pillow! Love forever, Poppy!

PrinceMyshkin
09-12-2007, 05:43 PM
You two! How wonderful! Betcha he loves you even more than he does fly-fishing!

Virgil
09-12-2007, 05:45 PM
Just so you'll have something to read before going to sleep. :yawnb:

The Other Night

I awake and wonder
Has sleep taken you yet
Are you in mist of dreams
Holding them as long as possible
I want hear your voice
Telling me everything is alright
You need to rest
So I wait till dawn
Touching you
kisses on your chin
trying to stir you awake.
“One more hour, let me sleep”,
You mumble.


Very nice Granny. I liked this one the best.

Granny5
09-12-2007, 06:53 PM
Thanks Virgil...And Prince...and he'd better not!

ampoule
09-12-2007, 07:04 PM
I'm seething with happiness! ;) ;) :D :D Love them.

Granny5
09-12-2007, 07:15 PM
thank you amp. you are very kind.

firefangled
09-12-2007, 09:30 PM
Granny, these were all so beautiful. I am just sitting here reading them and smiling at how beautiful it is to have people like you in the world.

stormy sky
09-14-2007, 09:32 AM
Hey Granny,
this is the first piece of work i've read,written by you i.e,
and i think it's very warm and a stream of warm honey seems to run through it.
"It’ll be a long night
Alone in our bed
No one to rub my head
No noise to let me know
That you’re here too."
this happens to be my fave part in the poem.
now i'll go and read some more of your stuff.

Pendragon
09-14-2007, 09:53 AM
Just so you'll have something to read before going to sleep. :yawnb:

The Other Night

I awake and wonder
Has sleep taken you yet
Are you in mist of dreams
Holding them as long as possible
I want hear your voice
Telling me everything is alright
You need to rest
So I wait till dawn
Touching you
kisses on your chin
trying to stir you awake.
“One more hour, let me sleep”,
You mumble.



Apart

Sweet kisses and warm hugs
and you are gone for what time
it takes to do what duty requires
Tell the governor that you must
remain with me a while longer.
One more kiss, just one more
because then I will be alone.
No matter who else is with me,
without you, I am always alone.
Except for the part of you I keep
in my heart and in my soul.
A part that remains no matter
how far you are from me.


Remote

Where will you be
without your remote
to change your channels
wherever you go
whatever you do



Tonight

It’ll be a long night
Wondering
Are you sleeping
Are you ok
Are you missing me
It’ll be a long night
Tossing and turning
Getting your pillow
Just like your shoulder
Laying on your side
It’ll be a long night
Alone in our bed
No one to rub my head
No noise to let me know
That you’re here too.

Dan

This life that you’ve given me
without selfishness and
with great thought
is what I waited for
I give you
my soul within yours
safe from all that would harm me.
My heart within yours
shielded from all danger
by your strong love
my love for you to hold forever
And after I go I will watch over you
till you arrive
I will be waiting to see
you smile when you see me
That special smile you have
for only me.


If I am fortunate, my wife will one day write things like this for me. Beautiful, Granny Sandy!

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/BlowaKiss.gif

Granny5
09-14-2007, 10:08 AM
Thank you Pen.

Granny5
09-14-2007, 10:11 AM
Hey Granny,
this is the first piece of work i've read,written by you i.e,
and i think it's very warm and a stream of warm honey seems to run through it.
"It’ll be a long night
Alone in our bed
No one to rub my head
No noise to let me know
That you’re here too."
this happens to be my fave part in the poem.
now i'll go and read some more of your stuff.

Stormy, don't expect to much. I'm just playing and not really a poet. motherhubbard and Poppy are the poets of the family. Thank you for being so kind. And leave the last two lines on your Touch poem. It's just beautiful. We are not Ozark Ogres...well, I'm not anyway but I do have my doubts about motherhubbard!

motherhubbard
09-14-2007, 10:41 AM
MOM! I can wear shoes same as you'ns

Granny5
09-14-2007, 10:43 AM
Shoes? Are you going to church or something this morning?

motherhubbard
09-14-2007, 10:46 AM
no, I's gonna kill me a chicken and fry it up in a skillit-jetyet?

Granny5
09-14-2007, 10:49 AM
no, I's gonna kill me a chicken and fry it up in a skillit-jetyet?

:lol: :lol: You sound just like Uncle Mike! Goin to wring it's neck or chop it off?

motherhubbard
09-14-2007, 10:50 AM
chop it

Granny5
09-14-2007, 10:55 AM
chop it

That would be a sight to see.....you think it'll just lay it's head down on the block??? Watch your fingers girl!

motherhubbard
09-14-2007, 10:57 AM
mom, really. I know more than you think. you cross two nails in a stump and hold the chicken by the feet and catch it's neck in the nails and pull - haven't you ever done this?

motherhubbard
09-14-2007, 10:59 AM
I should have mentioned that when you hold a chicken up side down the hold still

Granny5
09-14-2007, 10:59 AM
No Way!!! Granny used to wring their necks. Now, we have supermarkets for that kind of thing. I don't even like to think about it.

stormy sky
09-14-2007, 11:45 PM
it's so funky that you live on/near a farm(i'm guessing you do),i've always wanted a herd of mountain goat.but i live in a noisy crowded city and goats just remain a dream.

motherhubbard
09-14-2007, 11:47 PM
stormy, goats can be just as grumpy, noisy and smelly as the city

stormy sky
09-15-2007, 12:09 AM
Aaah ,but i'm sure they're nicer than irriating,stupid people in the city who try and push you out of the train,randomly stamp on your feet and pinch your ***.(i live in a developing economy and the last week's been a drag).
Images of goats and mountains can be rather warm and fuzzy.

motherhubbard
09-15-2007, 12:13 AM
I like it here

stormy sky
09-15-2007, 12:15 AM
I'm happy for you :)