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ampoule
09-10-2007, 09:08 AM
I guess I am sending this out today for poor mesoney. I know it hurts and look out....there'll be more. It's a thankless job but....

Syndication

The Americans.
How much they love their comedies,
to freshly laugh at old jokes as if
they had never been heard before.
I love the tragedies and I pray
you will not be angry if I watch you again.
In my mind's eye I repeat my favorite parts,
over and over and over,
never tiring of the constant reruns of our love.
Oh! Pardonne me s'il vous plait!
I should say, MY love.
My eyelids flutter and my head falls back
as I raise myself to feel your ghost embrace,
the kiss that swallows me,
and all that fills the parts of me.
And yes, I laugh with a freshness as if
I am the first to lose at love.

amp, January Seventh, TwoThousandTwo

CdnReader
09-10-2007, 09:12 AM
I really love this section, Amp. Beautifully (and heartbreakingly) said.



My eyelids flutter and my head falls back
as I raise myself to feel your ghost embrace,
the kiss that swallows me,
and all that fills the parts of me.

Granny5
09-10-2007, 09:20 AM
This is so beautiful. I hope mesoney reads it. Love really does hurt so darn bad sometimes but one usually does get over it, expecially when young.
For some of us, it's worth the pain to enjoy it again and again.

Demian
09-10-2007, 12:58 PM
Ah-I never received a greater blow in love than losing my very first one (and never will). And yet this pain, as unique as the person we are losing, is common to us all. Thanks for the verse. I'll be floating along in bittersweet reverie for a while. (This is good. I enjoy reverie.)

Pendragon
09-10-2007, 02:15 PM
Excusez-moi! , mais toutes Américain êtes pas dans amour à comédie. À quelques-unes de nous , échange c'est connu. My French is not the greatest in spite of it being my second language. (I mainly took it to flirt with the teacher!) Great poem!

Pen

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PrinceMyshkin
09-10-2007, 03:36 PM
I guess I am sending this out today for poor mesoney. I know it hurts and look out....there'll be more. It's a thankless job but....

Syndication

The Americans.
How much they love their comedies,
to freshly laugh at old jokes as if
they had never been heard before.
I love the tragedies and I pray
you will not be angry if I watch you again.
In my mind's eye I repeat my favorite parts,
over and over and over,
never tiring of the constant reruns of our love.
Oh! Pardonne me s'il vous plait!
I should say, MY love.
My eyelids flutter and my head falls back
as I raise myself to feel your ghost embrace,
the kiss that swallows me,
and all that fills the parts of me.
And yes, I laugh with a freshness as if
I am the first to lose at love.

amp, January Seventh, TwoThousandTwo

'Scuse me, but when it comes to trashing Americans, could you please leave that to we Canucks, French, English, Latvians &c.,? You've taken just about everything else we have, the least you can leave us is American-bashing!

ampoule
09-10-2007, 04:43 PM
'Scuse me, but when it comes to trashing Americans, could you please leave that to we Canucks, French, English, Latvians &c.,? You've taken just about everything else we have, the least you can leave us is American-bashing!

LOL....I just snorted! Good thing I wasn't drinking anything or you'd have a face full of it!
Best laugh I've had in quite awhile. Thanks Prince! :D