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aashishameya
09-10-2007, 01:37 AM
Thoughts come to me
Like a breeze
And inside me they freeze
When pain melts
Poems will bloom
CdnReader
09-10-2007, 04:39 AM
This is beautiful, Aash..... :)
ampoule
09-10-2007, 06:15 AM
I like, I like.
aashishameya
09-10-2007, 07:22 AM
thank you very much dear friends
PrinceMyshkin
09-10-2007, 07:54 AM
Wonderful economy in this! God bless the poet who knows that less is often more.
aashishameya
09-11-2007, 06:47 AM
yeah, sometimes short is big...