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Iamtylenol
09-09-2007, 08:16 PM
prior to reading please accept my apology if my poems do, in fact, anger or sadden you. if you do not accept please don't read.


i hold all that is dear to me responsible for what i am
i pass the blame to everyone and everything
nothing nocuous has ever come from me
every beneficial commodity i take credit for
claims of superiority come from me
yet the simplest tasks i cannot complete
for i am the ultimatum of life
accept me or perish
for i am islam.
part2:
i choose nonexistance over existing without life itself
i choose death before i throw away 10000 years of knowledge
not a single thing would ever make me succumb to fear
to embrace this false sense of life
would be to reverse humankind
justice will prevail over evil in disguise
this manifestation of tyranny, will never succeed!
for the likes of you stand no ground against me
i did not fight 10000 years for freedom to falter now
for i am intelligence
and i will never yield.

Iamtylenol
09-09-2007, 08:22 PM
satisfy yourself with these stupid games
soon you'll have another death to blame
claim to depend on nothing
yet attached to everything
bow before the queen of hipocrisy
i kneel for you my queen.


place yourself at my feet
now grovel at the sight of yourself
you belong to me now
not one word of resistance for fear of senseless rubuttal
you see how it is now?
to live a life in chains?
this is what you have created
this is what you made me into,
my dear.


i woke up extremely hungry:

oh how i yearn for such fantasies
where this kitchen is forever mine
every step i take leaves a trail of salsa
encased in the shells of tacos forever
maybe next time you half-asleep dreamer.

PrinceMyshkin
09-10-2007, 03:45 PM
i woke up extremely hungry:

oh how i yearn for such fantasies
where this kitchen is forever mine
every step i take leaves a trail of salsa
encased in the shells of tacos forever
maybe next time you half-asleep dreamer.

I thought that this last oine was the best of all, if indeed you meant it to stand alone? THere is more of a sense of completeness in this than in many of the others, where the passion - the anger for the most part - is at best semi-coherent. Even here unfortunately there is something puzzling about the final line. "Maybe next time" - what?

But the first four lines are very powerful.