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Shurtugal
09-03-2007, 12:03 AM
here are some my poems that i have recently written.

forgive the crazyness, i don't know what inspired my to write this but it seemed pretty and enchanting.

"Nanhrja"

Tonight when the night is still,
When the stars are lanterns
And the moon is light.
When fairies sing, and the fawns dance,
And th elves are dressed in white.
As the nymphs flutter in the trees
And the wind blows just a small breeze.
No one can deny this night of Nanhrja.

It is when love blooms and hate dies.
Like the crystal creek in summer time.
AS one shoot of a flower comes up.
Yet one must die.
So is the night of Nanhrja.

When sorrows are forgotten
No unhappy thoughts pass by.
When all hate is renounced.
And joy and peace are found.
As one paper is thrown away,
When the other is in it's place,
So is the night of Nanhrja.

http://www.warriorssociety.org/News/images/HJ-4_creeks_green.jpg

"Magical Kingdom"

Step by step, holding it closer;
Feet barely touching the floor.
I see it threw dreams of ambition,
Holding it's hand, dancing on air.

Wings start fluttering,
Air starts breathing.
Lights do twinkle up in the sky.

Moon's a beaming on feilds of clover.
Hear the tinkle of bells in the air?
Nymphs dance across the trees of life.
Fairies are singing, elves are dreaming.
And I lay here, close to my side
Is a dream of living, life in this world
Where fantisy is real, and dragons do soar!

And there's magic in the night
Under the moon so bright.
Why doubt the feeling I'm freeing my soul?

I break threw the trees,
That once kept me from living.
I'm a magical creature that no one can bare!

Step by step, magical kingdom,
Open your gates, let me ashore.

http://www.sompy.com/gr/fantasy/yuna/yuna400.jpg

Bakiryu
09-03-2007, 12:20 AM
Beautiful! And your spelling is stellar. (except for the th in the 1 stanza 5 line)

the silent x
09-05-2007, 08:26 PM
wow, amazingly well written, just like some of the poems of the elves

toni
09-05-2007, 09:45 PM
Shurtie! These are written enchantingly! :D

Im proud of you..

Shurtugal
09-06-2007, 03:14 PM
thanks you guise!!!!!!!!!! *give hug* it means so much to me to have everyone think of my poems so nicely!