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Lambert
08-29-2007, 08:13 AM
Geist

History, a distillation of rumour.
- Thomas Carlyle

We can not bear the weight of it's deception,
Power as the spectre, glimpsed and Unknowing.
We resolved to outmanoeuvre it, track it in
Dense yellow pages. Those blackened pages
Were our folly, for there it remained unseen,
In the gaping voids between our text, our record.
And then, it dissolved-
That was it's furtive ploy, coiled within
The conspiracy of History.
These cupped hands cannot hold it's water.
The water, brown and murky, seeps, spills,
Spreads through the dry land.
Here now, we are left barren, left to wander
The nightmare of the unpredictable, the paradoxical,
Where days are stretched like hides at a tannery.

Pendragon
08-29-2007, 08:47 AM
I would add the word "half" before "glimpsed", giving the idea of a more nebulous entity. Poem is great!

Pen

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