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Lote-Tree
08-29-2007, 05:17 AM
CyberSpace

I zoomin through the windows of your mouse clicks,
Trying to hit your shortcuts.
I leap from your inboxes and outboxes
Trying to keep pace
With the hard drive of your life.

I monitor your electronic surfing
Trying to distangle your web of lies
That you spin in the front of the screens.
The chatrooms of your mind is filled with
deceits. The instant messages you send
To your critics
serving one line text
to secure your networks of spies.

But one day I will hack through your
'past words' and log my complaint
on to your main frame of thoughts
and defragment my life in to a coherent
new begining without your permission.

It will be my new domain,
hosting my thoughts most valued applications
of feelings, remote sensing,
multi-tasking all my faculties and hidden
processes to achieve
modicum of security...

ampoule
08-29-2007, 06:31 AM
Very clever L-T!
The defragment my life....yes.

Lote-Tree
08-29-2007, 06:59 AM
Very clever L-T!
The defragment my life....yes.

:D you have to be a computer programmer to fully appreciate it :D

TheFifthElement
08-29-2007, 07:00 AM
This is indeed very clever Lote. I like it very much.

PrinceMyshkin
08-29-2007, 07:14 AM
Wonderful how you deployed the conceit of the computer all the way through without ever letting it get in the way of the strong emotion you needed to express!

Scheherazade
08-29-2007, 07:16 AM
I zoomin through the windows of your mouse clicks,
Trying to hit your shortcuts.Should be 'zoom'?

firefangled
08-29-2007, 07:48 AM
It will be my new domain,
hosting my thoughts most valued applications
of feelings, remote sensing,
multi-tasking all my faculties and hidden
processes to achieve
modicum of security...


Very imaginative Lote-Tree! This last stanza is my favorite, esp. remote sensing and hidden processes.

Lote-Tree
08-29-2007, 07:56 AM
Should be 'zoom'?

I invented a new word called "zoomin" - "zoom" and "in" - "zoomin" :D it is not in the dictionary (..yet ) :D But I guess it should be "zoom in" :-(

Merci.
Regards,
Lote.

Lote-Tree
08-29-2007, 07:59 AM
Wonderful how you deployed the conceit of the computer all the way through without ever letting it get in the way of the strong emotion you needed to express!

Thanks Prince :-)

Myshkin is an arabic word? for Pauper?

Prince Pauper? :-)

Thanks ampoule and Firefangled :-)